Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is quite natural and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy such as repeating "I'd say" twice. Also, use singular/plural forms correctly, for example, "a small detail" instead of "a small details." Try to make your sentences more concise and clear.

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things, but I excel at observing and recalling small details. For instance, I may not remember a person's face, but I can remember their qualities or a unique feature.

Sugerencia: Your answer starts well but is incomplete and lacks clarity. Avoid filler phrases like "that's a very interesting story" and try to complete your story with clear details. Also, use linking words to make your story coherent and logical.

Ejemplo: Yes, once I booked a flight from Bengaluru to Dehradun for 4:00 PM, but I forgot that the airport uses the 24-hour format. As a result, I arrived at 4:00 AM and missed my flight.

Sugerencia: Your answer is meaningful but a bit general and repetitive. Try to start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and try to be more specific.

Ejemplo: In daily life, I need to remember not to get upset over minor issues. Moreover, I should always be grateful for my family and friends, as they provide me with support and happiness.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid minor grammatical errors like "making A to do list" (should be "making a to-do list"). Also, use linking words to improve coherence and try to be more concise.

Ejemplo: I remember important tasks by making a to-do list on my phone. I check off each item by the end of the day, which gives me a sense of accomplishment.

× I would absolutely remember them by their qualities or a small details.

✓ I would absolutely remember them by their qualities or a small detail.

The phrase 'a small details' is incorrect because 'a' is used with singular nouns, but 'details' is plural. It should be 'a small detail' to maintain singular form after 'a'.

× I remember while I was booking the tickets, I booked them for 4:00 but I forgot that the time in airport is according to the 24 hour format and I reached there in.

✓ I remember while I was booking the tickets, I booked them for 4:00 but I forgot that the time at the airport is according to the 24-hour format and I reached there late.

The sentence is incomplete and has preposition errors. 'In airport' should be 'at the airport' (preposition correction). Also, '24 hour' should be hyphenated as '24-hour' (adjective form). The sentence ends abruptly; adding 'late' completes the thought. The verb tenses are consistent with past events.

× I forgot that the time in airport is according to the 24 hour format

✓ I forgot that the time at the airport is according to the 24-hour format

The correct preposition to use with 'airport' is 'at' not 'in'. Also, '24 hour' should be hyphenated as '24-hour' when used as an adjective before a noun.

× I reached there in.

✓ I reached there late.

The phrase 'reached there in' is incomplete and incorrect. The preposition 'in' is not appropriate here without specifying a time duration. Adding 'late' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× We should be thankful of what we have.

✓ We should be thankful for what we have.

The correct preposition to use with 'thankful' is 'for' not 'of'. Saying 'thankful for' expresses gratitude towards something.

× I remember important things by making A to do list or by simply creating a list on my phone which I take off by the end of the day

✓ I remember important things by making a to-do list or by simply creating a list on my phone which I tick off by the end of the day

The phrase 'take off' is incorrect in this context. The correct phrasal verb is 'tick off' meaning to mark items as completed. Also, 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' with lowercase 'a' and hyphens in 'to-do'.