Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答不够简洁，句子结构混乱，表达不够自然。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子表达过去和现在的记忆能力差异。

Ejemplo: I used to be good at memorising things when I was a child, like poems. However, now I often forget things, so I think my memory is not as good as before.

Sugerencia: 回答内容不清晰，语法错误较多，表达混乱。建议用简单明了的句子描述忘记重要物品的经历，并注意语法和逻辑。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, last year I accidentally left my computer and bag in the basket of a shared bike and couldn't find them later.

Sugerencia: 回答较为简单，缺少连贯性和细节。建议直接回答问题，并用连接词丰富内容，具体说明需要记住的物品及原因。

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember valuable items such as my bag, lipstick, and computer because losing them would cause inconvenience and loss.

Sugerencia: 表达较为清楚，但有语法错误和重复。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ejemplo: To remember important things, I write notes and stick them in visible places. Besides, I also set reminders on my phone with alert sounds to make sure I don't forget.

× Where I find it hard to answer it because when I was a kid I think I am good at memorizing things because I can remember the poem that I recite when I was a kid even now, but I think I'm not good at memorizing somethings now because I always forget something.

✓ I find it hard to answer because when I was a kid I thought I was good at memorizing things because I could remember the poem that I recited when I was a kid even now, but I think I'm not good at memorizing things now because I always forget something.

句子中时态混用，描述过去的事情应使用过去时态，如 think 应改为 thought，am 应改为 was，can 应改为 could，recite 应改为 recited。保持时态一致有助于表达清晰。

× ...but I think I'm not good at memorizing somethings now because I always forget something.

✓ ...but I think I'm not good at memorizing things now because I always forget something.

'somethings' 是错误的复数形式，正确用法是 'something'（不可数或单数），此处应使用 'things' 来表示复数。

× Of course I do. At the age school I always forget something important.

✓ Of course I do. At school age I always forgot something important.

描述过去习惯时应使用过去时态，'always forget' 应改为 'always forgot'。另外，'at the age school' 语序错误，应改为 'at school age'。

× Last year I've got my computer and my bug that brought I brought from the UK to the basket of the sharing bike.

✓ Last year I got my computer and my bag that I brought from the UK in the basket of the shared bike.

'I've got' 应改为过去时 'I got'，'bug' 应为 'bag'，'that brought I brought' 语序错误，应为 'that I brought'，'sharing bike' 应为 'shared bike'。保持时态和词序正确。

× I can find it.

✓ I can't find it.

根据上下文，学生想表达“我找不到它”，应使用否定形式 'can't'，而非肯定的 'can'。

× I think I need to remember all of my valuable things like the bags, the lipsticks, the computers in my daily life.

✓ I think I need to remember all my valuable things like bags, lipsticks, and computers in my daily life.

'all of my valuable things' 中 'of' 可省略，且列举时不需要定冠词 'the'，应直接使用复数名词。

× To be honest, I will write a note to stick it on on some places that I can see it anytime I want to remind me the important things.

✓ To be honest, I will write a note and stick it in some places where I can see it anytime to remind me of important things.

'stick it on on some places' 重复 'on'，应改为 'stick it in some places'，'that I can see it' 应改为 'where I can see it'，'remind me the important things' 应为 'remind me of important things'。

× Besides, I will write it on my phone and set a alerting bell to remind.

✓ Besides, I will write it on my phone and set an alerting bell to remind me.

'a alerting bell' 中 'a' 应改为 'an'，且 'to remind' 后应加宾语 'me'。