Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答不够自然流畅，存在语法错误和重复表达，且内容较为简单。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇表达观点。

Ejemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, when I was 12, I struggled with history because I found it hard to remember all the dates and places.

Sugerencia: 回答中有重复和语法不准确，表达不够连贯。建议使用更自然的表达方式，减少重复，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: I rarely forget important things because I usually tell my family, and they remind me often, so it's hard for me to forget.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够简洁。建议直接回答问题，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

Ejemplo: I need to remember my school schedule because it's important to follow the rules and attend classes on time to make a good impression on my teachers.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和不清晰的表达，且有口语填充词。建议去除多余词汇，使用清晰准确的表达，并合理使用连接词。

Ejemplo: I usually ask my friends or family to remind me. Also, I make lists on my phone because I use it every day, which helps me remember important things.

× I have to learn history but I did so bad at this subject because I hate memorizing all the numbers, locations, and all of the, uh, details, which is so.

✓ I had to learn history but I did so badly at this subject because I hated memorizing all the numbers, locations, and all of the, uh, details, which was so.

这里时态不一致。句子开头用过去时态“had to”，后面“did so bad”应改为副词形式“did so badly”，动词“hate”应改为过去时态“hated”，最后“which is so”应改为过去时态“which was so”。建议保持时态一致，描述过去的事情时用过去时。

× I have to learn history but I did so bad at this subject because I hate memorizing all the numbers, locations, and all of the, uh, details, which is so.

✓ I had to learn history but I did so badly at this subject because I hated memorizing all the numbers, locations, and all of the, uh, details, which was so.

“have to”表示现在或将来义，描述过去的事情应使用过去时态“had to”。

× Not really in my memory, umm, I didn't forget.

✓ Not really in my memory, umm, I haven't forgotten.

这里描述的是过去到现在的经历，使用现在完成时“haven't forgotten”更合适，表示到目前为止没有忘记。

× I often told my family and they will remind me frequently, so it's hard for me to forget them.

✓ I often tell my family and they remind me frequently, so it's hard for me to forget them.

“often told”用过去时不合适，描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时“often tell”；“they will remind”表示将来时，习惯动作应用一般现在时“they remind”。

× I think it's important for us to follow the school rules and attend every classes on time.

✓ I think it's important for us to follow the school rules and attend every class on time.

“every”后应接单数名词，故“every classes”应改为“every class”。

× I think it's important for us to follow the school rules and attend every classes on time.

✓ I think it's important for us to follow the school rules and attend every class on time.

“attend”后直接接名词，不需要介词“on”，但这里原句无介词错误，主要是复数错误。

× I will make lists on my phone with Laos, uh, because, uh, you know, we have to use our phone every day, so it's a good way for us to remember these things.

✓ I will make lists on my phone with notes, uh, because, uh, you know, we have to use our phone every day, so it's a good way for us to remember these things.

“with Laos”应为“with notes”，这里是拼写错误，且“make lists on my phone with notes”表达更准确。