Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“memory things”应为“at memorising things”，且表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并避免重复。

Ejemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I often have to repeat small parts many times and write them down repeatedly. For example, I find it especially hard to remember English words, so my memory for them is quite short.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较完整，但句子结构稍显混乱，建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时注意时态和语法的准确性。

Ejemplo: Yes, last year I forgot the time of an important appointment because I didn't write it down. Fortunately, I realized my mistake just in time and managed to reach the place I needed to go.

Sugerencia: 表达中“a huge odd amount of things”不自然，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，同时丰富细节使内容更具体。

Ejemplo: I need to remember a large number of things in my daily life. For example, I have to memorise English words to prepare for exams and also remember biology concepts for monthly tests.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误，如“read”应为“reading”，且表达不够流畅。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法和连贯性。

Ejemplo: I remember important things by repeating them many times and reading them over and over again. Also, for especially important things, I write them down on my calendar to avoid forgetting.

× No, I'm not good at memory things.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorising things.

这里'memory things'用法不正确，应该用动名词'memorising things'表示记忆的动作。

× I usually have to repeat small parts many times and written over and over again.

✓ I usually have to repeat small parts many times and write them over and over again.

这里'written'是过去分词，句中应使用动词原形或动名词形式，且与'repeat'并列，应使用'write'。

× But fortunately I realized my mistake and just in time and I finally reached the place where I need to go.

✓ But fortunately I realized my mistake just in time and finally reached the place where I needed to go.

句中'then'缺失，且后半句应使用过去时态'needed'，因为描述的是过去的事件。

× I need to remember a huge odd amount of things.

✓ I need to remember a huge odd number of things.

'amount'用于不可数名词，'things'是可数名词，应使用'number'。

× I remember important things by repeating many times and read over and over again.

✓ I remember important things by repeating many times and reading over and over again.

'by'后应接动名词形式，'read'应改为'reading'。

× And also for some especially important things I write them down on my calendar to prevent I forgotten.

✓ And also for some especially important things I write them down on my calendar to prevent forgetting.

'to prevent'后应接动名词，'I forgotten'不正确，应改为'forgetting'。