Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Apni answer e kichu beshi clear structure rakhte paren. Prothome direct question er uttor din, tarpor kichu specific example den. Apnar answer e kichu redundancy ache, ar kichu sentence incomplete mone hocche. Apni chesta korun 3-4 sentence er moddhe clear, natural uttor dite.

Ejemplo: Yes, I used to be very good at memorising things when I was younger. However, recently I have started forgetting small details, even some important ones. For example, I sometimes forget where I kept my keys or important documents. So, I think my memory is not as sharp as before.

Sugerencia: Apnar uttor e onek hesitation ar incomplete sentence ache, ja naturalness komay. Apni chesta korun proshner uttor direct dite, tarpor specific example diye support korun. Linking words use korle uttor aro logical hobe.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things sometimes. For instance, when I am in my room, I may forget to complete some tasks or appointments. This happens because I have many responsibilities, so I try to write reminders to avoid forgetting.

Sugerencia: Apnar uttor e repetition ache, ar kichu sentence onek similar. Apni chesta korun proshner uttor e ekta clear topic sentence diye start korte, tarpor kichu specific details add korte linking words diye.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my work schedule and personal tasks. For example, I plan my meetings and also remember to take care of my family responsibilities. Therefore, I always keep a to-do list to stay organized.

Sugerencia: Apnar uttor e bhalo content ache, kintu sentence gulo incomplete ar kichu repetition ache. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke complete korte, ar linking words use kore uttor ke aro coherent korte.

Ejemplo: Since I am a working woman and a mother of a school-going child, I have to balance both roles carefully. Therefore, I prepare a daily schedule and maintain a diary to remember important tasks. This method helps me stay organized and not forget anything important.

× I think I was good in memorizing things earlier, but nowadays I started forgetting very small small things, so now I'm not that much good.

✓ I think I was good at memorizing things earlier, but nowadays I have started forgetting very small things, so now I'm not that good.

The phrase 'started forgetting' should be in present perfect tense 'have started forgetting' to indicate an action that began in the past and continues now. Also, 'good in memorizing' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'good at'. The phrase 'not that much good' is awkward; it should be 'not that good'. Repetition of 'small' is unnecessary.

× I was. So yes, I forget sometimes the important things, but previous?

✓ I was. So yes, I sometimes forget important things, but before?

The adverb 'sometimes' should be placed before the verb 'forget'. The word 'previous' is incorrectly used; 'before' is more appropriate here to refer to past times.

× As I have mentioned, uh, when I was younger, I remembered maximum things that was important, but nowadays I tend to forget some important things, uh, for example, uh, when I in my, when I am in my chamber sometime.

✓ As I have mentioned, when I was younger, I remembered most things that were important, but nowadays I tend to forget some important things, for example, when I am in my chamber sometimes.

'Maximum things' is incorrect; 'most things' is the correct phrase. 'That was important' should be 'that were important' to agree with plural 'things' (subject-verb agreement). 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× I think I was good in memorizing things earlier

✓ I think I was good at memorizing things earlier

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at', not 'in'. So, 'good at memorizing' is correct.

× when I in my, when I am in my chamber sometime.

✓ when I am in my chamber sometimes.

The phrase 'when I in my' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'when I am in my'. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× As I am a working woman and a mother of school going child so I need to balance both of the life simultaneously and for this reason I should prepare my schedule based on my daily routine and to remember these things I maintain a diary or notebook or.

✓ As I am a working woman and a mother of a school-going child, I need to balance both aspects of life simultaneously, and for this reason, I prepare my schedule based on my daily routine. To remember these things, I maintain a diary or notebook.

The phrase 'mother of school going child' is missing an article 'a' before 'school-going child'. 'Both of the life' is incorrect; it should be 'both aspects of life' or 'both parts of life'. The sentence is run-on and needs to be split for clarity. Also, 'or' at the end is incomplete and should be removed or completed.