Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但句子较长且有些重复，缺少连接词使表达不够连贯。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词如“because”或“so”来增强逻辑性，同时避免冗余。

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things because I struggled with subjects like history and politics in high school, where I found it hard to remember important events and famous people.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够简洁。建议使用更简洁的句子，避免重复“because”，并用连接词如“so”使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: I don't think I've forgotten anything important because I always record important dates in my calendar and set alarms so that I can prepare for exams or social events on time.

Sugerencia: 回答不完整且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，补充完整内容，并使用连接词如“for example”或“such as”来丰富细节。

Ejemplo: I need to remember many things daily, such as my family and friends' birthdays, final exams, and presentation dates, so I can prepare for them in advance.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复“so that”，并使用连接词如“especially”来突出重点。

Ejemplo: I keep a to-do list on both my phone and computer, which I check before and after work to remind myself of important tasks. Especially before exams or presentations, I set multiple alarms to ensure I don't forget.

× In my high school, I was really struggling with the liberal subjects such as history and politics.

✓ In my high school, I really struggled with liberal subjects such as history and politics.

这里使用过去进行时（was struggling）不太合适，因为描述的是过去一段时间内的习惯或状态，应该用一般过去时（struggled）。建议用一般过去时表达过去的习惯或状态。

× I couldn't remember all the names of important events or some popular people.

✓ I couldn't remember the names of important events or some famous people.

这里“some popular people”用词不准确，应该用“famous people”表示著名的人物。建议使用更准确的形容词表达意思。

× Uh, I think not, because if something is really important, I would not only record the things in the calendar but also set alarms for it, because I don't want to avoid really important things such as examinations or some social events, so I have to prepare for it.

✓ Uh, I don't think so, because if something is really important, I not only record it in the calendar but also set alarms for it, because I don't want to miss really important things such as examinations or some social events, so I have to prepare for them.

“I think not”表达不自然，应该用“I don't think so”。“would not only record”时态和语气不合适，改为一般现在时“not only record”。“avoid”用错，应该是“miss”。“things”前后数不一致，改为复数“them”。建议注意情态动词和动词搭配的正确使用。

× There are quite a lot of things I need to remember every day, for example the birthday of my families and friends and some important events such as final examinations or some presentation time so that I should pre so that I can have time to prepare for them.

✓ There are quite a lot of things I need to remember every day, for example the birthdays of my family and friends and some important events such as final examinations or presentation times so that I can have time to prepare for them.

“birthday”应为复数“birthdays”，因为指多个生日。“families”应为单数“family”，表示家庭成员。最后“presentation time”应为复数“presentation times”。建议注意单复数的一致性。

× And also there are some.

✓ And also, there are some other things.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，导致表达不清。建议补充完整句子，使表达完整。

× Uh, for remembering important things, I have A to do list not only my on my phone, but also on my computer so that I can see the list every day before my work and after my work so that I can remind me of those important things.

✓ Uh, to remember important things, I have a to-do list not only on my phone but also on my computer so that I can see the list every day before and after my work to remind myself of those important things.

“I have A to do list not only my on my phone”语序错误，应为“a to-do list not only on my phone”。“so that I can remind me”错误，主语和宾语重复，应为“remind myself”。建议注意代词的正确使用和句子结构。

× And also, uh, especially before some examinations or presentations, I would cite multiple alarms to remind me of them.

✓ And also, especially before some examinations or presentations, I set multiple alarms to remind me of them.

“cite multiple alarms”用词错误，应该用“set multiple alarms”。“cite”通常用于引用，不适合这里。建议使用正确的动词搭配。