Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子并使用正确的时态和表达方式。

Ejemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, when I was in school, I found it difficult to remember texts on time, and sometimes I couldn't remember them at all.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议使用更准确的时态和连贯的句子结构，同时避免重复和口头语。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. For instance, I once had an appointment with my friend to go to the gym for training, but I forgot because I received a phone call. I felt really sorry about that.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较为笼统，建议提供更具体的细节，并且注意句子流畅和逻辑连接。

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks and appointments. For example, every evening I review my day and prepare a schedule for the next day to stay organized.

Sugerencia: 回答中有口头语和表达不够自然，建议去除填充词，使用更准确的表达，并且句子结构更清晰。

Ejemplo: I usually put reminders in obvious places, such as on my phone's home screen or the first page of my textbooks, so I can notice them immediately.

× Memorize things is quite painful for me because for example when I was in primary school or high school is a master to memorize some text, but I can't even remember it on time or even with I can't even remember it at all.

✓ Memorizing things is quite painful for me because, for example, when I was in primary school or high school, I had to memorize some text, but I couldn't even remember it on time or sometimes I couldn't remember it at all.

动词后面需要用动名词形式（memorizing）来表示动作的名词化。原句中使用了动词原形，语法错误。建议将'memorize'改为'memorizing'。

× Memorize things is quite painful for me because for example when I was in primary school or high school is a master to memorize some text, but I can't even remember it on time or even with I can't even remember it at all.

✓ Memorizing things is quite painful for me because, for example, when I was in primary school or high school, I had to memorize some text, but I couldn't even remember it on time or sometimes I couldn't remember it at all.

描述过去的事情时，动词应使用过去时态。原句中'can't'应改为'couldn't'以符合过去时态。

× last time my friend, uh, with me have a appointment to the gym for some energy training, but suddenly a call came to me.

✓ Last time, my friend and I had an appointment at the gym for some energy training, but suddenly a call came to me.

介词使用错误，'have a appointment to the gym'应改为'had an appointment at the gym'，表示在某地有约会。

× last time my friend, uh, with me have a appointment to the gym for some energy training, but suddenly a call came to me.

✓ Last time, my friend and I had an appointment at the gym for some energy training, but suddenly a call came to me.

'a appointment'中冠词'a'后应接单数名词，'appointment'拼写正确但冠词使用正确，且主语应为复数形式'my friend and I'，动词应相应改为'had'。

× last time my friend, uh, with me have a appointment to the gym for some energy training, but suddenly a call came to me. I just forgot this. I'm quite sorry for him.

✓ Last time, my friend and I had an appointment at the gym for some energy training, but suddenly a call came to me. I just forgot about it. I'm quite sorry for him.

'forgot this'用法不当，应该用'forgot about it'来表达忘记某事。

× Well, I I believe there are a lot of things to remember in my daily life.

✓ Well, I believe there are a lot of things to remember in my daily life.

句中重复了'I'，应删除多余的'I'。

× There are so much things like this.

✓ There are so many things like this.

'things'是可数名词，量词应使用'many'而非'much'。

× Whereas for me, I would like to umm, place these things in some very obvious places like your phone page or your textbooks first page.

✓ As for me, I would like to place these things in some very obvious places like my phone screen or the first page of my textbooks.

代词使用不当，'your'应改为'my'以保持主语一致；'phone page'应为'phone screen'，'textbooks first page'应为'the first page of my textbooks'。