Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and use correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am good at memorising things. When I was a child, I quickly learned new information because I had a strong ability to focus and remember details.

Sugerencia: Your answer tells a clear story but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use past tense consistently and avoid repetition. Use linking words to make the story flow better.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, once I went to an office with my passport and my friend. Somehow, I left my passport in his car. When I got home, I realized it was missing and felt very shocked.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more concise. Avoid informal contractions like 'cause' in formal speaking. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember a few important things, especially my house keys. This is crucial because without them, I cannot enter my house or even my workplace since both keys are attached together.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use present tense consistently and avoid repetition. Use linking words to improve coherence and provide more specific examples.

Ejemplo: I usually set reminders on my phone for important events like birthdays or when I need to bring something, such as my passport. Additionally, my mother often helps me remember important tasks.

× When I was a child I was very good in learning things and I was so quick to catch things and moreover I had a really good thinking and ability to capture thing and remember it.

✓ When I was a child I was very good at learning things and I was so quick to catch things and moreover I had really good thinking and the ability to capture things and remember them.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect after 'good' when referring to skills; it should be 'good at'. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context, and 'a really good thinking' is incorrect; 'thinking' is uncountable here, so 'really good thinking' is correct. Additionally, 'ability to capture thing' should be 'ability to capture things'. Lastly, 'remember it' should be 'remember them' to refer back to plural 'things'.

× One time I went to a office with my passport and I was with my friend and somehow I put my passport in his car and I just came back.

✓ One time I went to an office with my passport and I was with my friend and somehow I put my passport in his car and I just came back.

The article 'a' is incorrect before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'office'; it should be 'an office'. This is an article error but also relates to singular/plural usage.

× It's really important for me to remember it 'cause without my house keys, I'm not able to enter to my house even at work 'cause my house keys and the work keys are together.

✓ It's really important for me to remember it 'cause without my house keys, I'm not able to enter my house even at work 'cause my house keys and the work keys are together.

The preposition 'to' after 'enter' is incorrect; the verb 'enter' is directly followed by the object without a preposition. So, 'enter to my house' should be 'enter my house'.

× So I always had a reminder and my mom also always helped me to keep things remembered.

✓ So I always have a reminder and my mom also always helps me to keep things remembered.

The verb tense is inconsistent with the present context. 'Had' and 'helped' are past tense, but the sentence refers to habitual actions, so present tense 'have' and 'helps' should be used. Also, 'keep things remembered' is awkward; better phrasing would be 'keep things in mind' or 'remember things', but since the instruction is to correct only grammar problems from the list, the tense correction is applied here.