Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答需更直接且句子更完整，减少重复和语法错误。开头给出简洁的主题句，随后用一到两句具体说明（什么时候、怎样困难、举例），并使用连接词使逻辑更清楚。注意时态和单复数一致，避免重复词汇（如“rememberance”“as time as time”）。

Ejemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, in high school I had to learn long passages by heart, and I often needed twice as much time as my classmates to revise. Because I found it hard to remember exact wording, I relied on understanding the main ideas instead.

Sugerencia: 回答应更清晰地叙述一次具体事件，使用正确的时态和人称，减少填充词（uh）。先给出肯定回答，再说明具体遗忘的是什么、为什么会忘以及结果或影响。

Ejemplo: Yes, I once forgot my mother's birthday. My parents follow the lunar calendar, so the date changes each year and I mixed it up. As a result, I missed the celebration but later made up for it by taking her out for dinner and apologising.

Sugerencia: 回答要用简洁的句子说明日常需要记住的具体事项，避免性别和代词混淆（her/his），并使用恰当词汇（e.g. ‘medication’, ‘vaccination’）。可以提供频率或方法（每天、每周）作为细节。

Ejemplo: I need to remember my dog's medication schedule. For example, he takes a joint supplement every morning and has vaccinations at specific times, so I write these dates in a calendar and set phone reminders.

Sugerencia: 回答应先直接说明主要方法（例如使用笔记、手机提醒等），然后给出具体细节和例子。避免语法错误（e.g. 'I have poor memorising skills'），并使用连词使句子连贯。

Ejemplo: I don't rely on memory alone, so I write important information down. I keep a small notebook for tasks and also use my phone's calendar and alarms to remind me of appointments and deadlines.

× No, I don't think I'm good at remembering things. For example, when I was in high school, I need to remember remembrance the whole passage of and I have to spend twice as much as time as time revising as my classmates. So I.

✓ No, I don't think I'm good at remembering things. For example, when I was in high school, I needed to remember the whole passage, and I had to spend twice as much time revising as my classmates.

句子中时态不一致：主句谈过去的经历，应使用过去时。原句中使用了现在时“need”与过去时间状语“when I was in high school”冲突。并且出现冗余词“remembrance”和重复短语“as time as time”。建议统一使用过去时（needed, had to），删除多余词，重组句子以保证流畅。

× Yes, I used to got something important like, uh, one I used to forgot my mother's birthday because, uh, they, my parents used to use lunar calendar.

✓ Yes, I used to lose important things. Once I forgot my mother's birthday because my parents used the lunar calendar.

原句中混用了“used to”和过去式“got/forgot”，结构错误。短语“used to”后应接动词原形，表示过去经常发生的事；而表示过去某次事件可用简单过去时。建议把含义分成两句：第一句用过去习惯或一般过去（used to lose / I used to lose），第二句描述一次具体事件用简单过去（I forgot / because my parents used）。同时去掉不必要的停顿词和杂乱语序。

× Uh, seems I have a pet dog and need to remember the day when he need to eat medicine to protect her bone, his bones and need to enough time to injection the wax.

✓ Uh, I have a pet dog and need to remember the day when he needs to take medicine to protect his bones and to have enough time for the injection.

原句主谓不一致与代词混用：主语是第三人称单数“he”，谓语应为“needs”。代词“her”与“his”混用造成性别不一致。动词搭配也有问题，“eat medicine”应为“take medicine”，“need to enough time to injection”应调整为“have enough time for the injection”。建议统一代词性别，使用正确动词搭配，并保持主谓一致。

× I think I'm have a poor memorizing skills. So, uh, they're all single In Chinese. We, we usually take something down rather than remember that in mind. So I have a little book to notice.

✓ I think I have poor memorizing skills. In Chinese, we usually write things down rather than remember them in our minds. So I have a little notebook to take notes.

原句存在时态和形式错误：“I'm have”为错误组合，应该用“I have”。“memorizing skills”与“a”搭配不当，应为“poor memorizing skills”或“a poor memory”。“take something down”搭配应为“write things down”或“take something down”，同时代词“that”应改为复数“them”，并将“a little book to notice”改为常用表达“a little notebook to take notes”。建议使用固定搭配并注意主谓一致与代词数的一致性。