Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence that clearly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct grammar (use 'memory' or 'good at remembering') and simpler sentence structure. Keep it within 2–4 sentences and use linking words like 'for example' or 'however'.

Ejemplo: Not really — I'm not good at remembering details. For example, I often forget people's birthdays and the dates of parties, so I usually set reminders on my phone to help me remember.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear yes/no and give a specific example of an important thing you forgot. Explain briefly why it happened and what you did afterwards. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'forgot my father's birthday') and linkers like 'for instance' or 'so'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. For instance, I once forgot my father's birthday, which upset him. Since then I put important dates into my phone calendar and set reminders so I don't forget again.

Sugerencia: This answer is mostly clear and relevant. Improve by making the topic sentence more direct and tightening language (avoid filler like 'uh'). Add one linking phrase to show sequence and one specific detail about timing or duration to be more precise.

Ejemplo: I need to remember my morning routine to start the day productively. For example, when I wake up I read for 20 minutes, do 15 minutes of light exercise, and then have breakfast before I begin work.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear, direct description of your methods (e.g., phone reminders, lists, routines). Use simple declarative sentences and avoid unclear phrases. Give one or two concrete techniques and a brief example of how you use them.

Ejemplo: I usually use my phone to remember important things. For example, I add events to my calendar and set alarms, and I also write a short to-do list each evening so I don't forget tasks the next day.

× Things no I'm not a good memories things some people's birthday date and others occasions party date I can't remember so much.

✓ No, I'm not good at remembering things. I can't remember many people's birthdays and other occasions or party dates.

The student used incorrect plural forms and noun choices ('a good memories', 'birthday date'). Use the uncountable gerund 'remembering' after 'good at' and pluralize or use plural nouns correctly ('birthdays', 'occasions'). Also use 'many' to quantify countable nouns. Rephrase sentence order for clarity.

× Like my father's birthday date, lithologica and other my mother birthday date, anniversary and other things. I can't remember much time and I practiced this uh.

✓ For example, I have forgotten my father's and my mother's birthdays, anniversaries, and other important dates. I don't remember them often, although I have tried to practice remembering them.

The original sentence mixes nouns and incorrect verb forms. Use present perfect ('have forgotten') to refer to past events with present relevance. Correct noun phrases ('my mother's birthday'), list items clearly, and use 'often' or 'much' appropriately. 'Practiced this' should specify the action (practicing to remember) and use present perfect for ongoing effort ('have tried').

× I need to remember to follow my morning routine, so I started the day productively. For example, when I wake up, I usually read uh for a while and do some light exercise. Then I have breakfast before I begin work or study.

✓ I need to remember to follow my morning routine so I can start the day productively. For example, when I wake up, I usually read for a while and do some light exercise. Then I have breakfast before I begin work or study.

Tense inconsistency: 'I started the day productively' is past while surrounding verbs are present habitual. Change to 'I can start' to express result. Remove filler 'uh'. Maintain present simple for habitual actions ('wake up', 'read', 'do', 'have', 'begin').

× That have no argument because when I sleep my mind always say you need to wake up morning and you have study and pray exercise, that's that's it.

✓ It's simple: when I sleep, my mind always tells me to wake up in the morning to study, pray, and exercise. That's it.

The original has incorrect subject-verb agreement ('That have'), missing articles ('wake up in the morning'), and incorrect verb forms ('say you need', 'you have study'). Use 'tells me' for reporting thoughts, infinitives or base verbs after 'to' ('to study, to pray, to exercise' or list without 'to') and correct punctuation for clarity.

× Like my father's birthday date, lithologica and other my mother birthday date, anniversary and other things.

✓ For example, my father's birthday, my mother's birthday, anniversaries, and other important dates.

The phrase 'birthday date' is redundant; use 'birthday'. 'Other my mother birthday' has incorrect word order—possessive should be before the noun ('my mother's birthday'). Use commas and conjunctions to list items properly. Remove unnecessary prepositions.