Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and use a clear topic sentence. Correct minor grammar (e.g., "I'm pretty bad at it"), avoid repetition, and add a brief reason or example to support your statement. Use linking words for coherence.

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things. I often forget information shortly after hearing it, so I rely on reminders from friends or my phone. For example, I frequently ask someone to repeat plans so I don't miss appointments.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, structured response: start with a direct answer, then briefly narrate the event with correct grammar and specific details. Use linking words (e.g., "for example", "however") and avoid confusing phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. For example, once I forgot my lab coat before a science experiment, which felt awful at first. However, I was able to borrow one from the lab assistant, so the experiment still went ahead without a problem.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct topic sentence and clean up grammar. Be specific about items and use linking words to organise points (e.g., "for instance", "also"). Mention the method you use to remember and give a short reason why.

Ejemplo: I need to remember things that change day to day, such as which homework or materials to bring to school. For instance, I might need a lab report one day and sports kit the next, so I use reminder apps on my phone to keep track of these tasks.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear, direct answer first, then give specific methods and a brief reason. Correct small grammar errors ("more convenient" -> "for convenience"; "which will pop up"). Limit to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like "also" or "alternatively".

Ejemplo: I usually ask my parents to remind me in the morning, as we have breakfast together. Alternatively, for convenience I set notifications on a reminder app on my phone that pops up each morning so I don't forget important tasks.

× Uh, I'll say pretty bad.

✓ Uh, I'd say I'm pretty bad at it.

The phrase 'I'll say pretty bad' is ungrammatical because 'say' + adjective needs an appropriate subject and verb form. Use 'I'd say' (I would say) as a hedging phrase and include the subject 'I'm' before the adjective 'pretty bad' to form a correct predication. Suggestion: use 'I'd say I'm pretty bad at it.'

× I have goldfish memories.

✓ I have a goldfish memory.

The idiom is 'a goldfish memory' (singular) meaning poor memory. Using plural 'memories' is unusual. Also include the indefinite article 'a'. Suggestion: say 'I have a goldfish memory' or 'My memory is like a goldfish.'

× I often forget things after the moment people have told me, so I always need people to remind me about everything.

✓ I often forget things right after people tell me, so I always need them to remind me about everything.

Use simple present 'tell' for habitual action instead of present perfect 'have told'. 'After the moment' is awkward; 'right after' is natural. Replace repeated 'people' with 'them' for cohesion. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and concise time expressions.

× Yes, I think every most of people have experienced one which sounds like a nightmare to me and the most one impressive time is I forgot my lab coat at home from science experience and I thought I wouldn't be able to do it but it turns out everything is fine as I can borrow the lab code in the science lab so.

✓ Yes, I think most people have experienced something like that, and the most memorable time was when I forgot my lab coat at home during a science experiment. I thought I wouldn't be able to participate, but it turned out fine because I could borrow a lab coat at school.

Multiple issues: 'every most of people' should be 'most people' (quantifier). Use present perfect 'have experienced' is fine for life experience; keep it. 'One which sounds like a nightmare to me' is awkward—use 'something like that.' 'The most one impressive time' should be 'the most memorable time.' 'From science experience' should be 'during a science experiment.' Tense consistency: use past simple 'was', 'forgot', 'thought', 'turned out', 'could borrow'. Use correct noun 'lab coat' (not 'lab code') and include article 'a'. Suggestions: simplify and use correct collocations and past tense for specific past events.

× Probably not something I'm using every day like my wallet.

✓ Probably not something I use every day, like my wallet.

Do not use present continuous 'I'm using' for habitual possessions; simple present 'I use' is correct. Also include comma before example. Suggestion: use simple present for habits: 'something I use every day.'

× I probably won't forget about it, but I might need some reminder on what homework do I need to bring to school or what special thing do I need not in my daily routine.

✓ I probably won't forget it, but I might need a reminder about which homework I need to bring to school or about special things that aren't part of my daily routine.

Remove unnecessary 'about' after 'forget'. 'Some reminder' is better as 'a reminder'. Questions 'what homework do I need' should be embedded as statements 'which homework I need' (no question word order). 'What special thing do I need not in my daily routine' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'special things that aren't part of my daily routine.' Suggestion: use statement word order in indirect questions and correct articles.

× So I may need some reminder apps on my phone to remind me to keep in mind on things.

✓ So I may need some reminder apps on my phone to help me remember things.

'Remind me to keep in mind on things' is incorrect. Use 'help me remember things' or 'remind me about things.' Preposition 'on' is unnecessary. Suggestion: simplify to 'help me remember things' or 'remind me about things.'

× Uh, sometimes I'll tell my parents to remind me since they will be having breakfast with me every morning.

✓ Uh, sometimes I ask my parents to remind me since they have breakfast with me every morning.

'I'll tell my parents to remind me' is understandable but 'I ask my parents to remind me' is more natural. 'Will be having breakfast' is unnecessary future progressive; use simple present 'have breakfast' for habitual actions. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and choose natural verbs like 'ask'.

× Or for more convenient I will use my phone.

✓ Or for convenience I use my phone,

'For more convenient' is wrong; use the noun 'convenience' or phrase 'to be more convenient'. Also avoid future 'will' for habitual action; use simple present 'I use'. Suggestion: say 'Or for convenience, I use my phone.'

× I download some reminder apps which will pops out every morning to remind me and I think it is really convenient.

✓ I download some reminder apps that pop up every morning to remind me, and I think it's really convenient.

'Will pops out' mixes future auxiliary with third-person singular 'pops' incorrectly. Use simple present 'pop up' for habitual actions. Use 'that' or 'which' with correct verb form 'pop up'. Contractions: 'it's' for 'it is'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and correct verb forms: 'apps that pop up.'