Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific example with linking words. Avoid unnecessary repetition and correct verb forms (e.g., 'remind' not 'mention', 'I do make a few mistakes').

Ejemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising. For example, I often remind my friends about important dates like appointments or deadlines, although sometimes I make small mistakes. Because I keep lists on my phone, I can usually remember most things.

Sugerencia: Use past tense correctly and give a brief consequence or feeling. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add a specific detail and a linking word to show result or feeling.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. Once I forgot my best friend's birthday and I felt very guilty afterwards because I usually never forget important dates. As a result, I apologised and bought a gift to make up for it.

Sugerencia: Organise your answer: state the main thing you must remember, then add one or two specific examples using linking words. Use proper noun forms and verb agreement (e.g., 'homework' not 'homeworks').

Ejemplo: The main things I need to remember each day are my homework and study plans. For example, I write down which assignments I must finish and revise for upcoming exams so I don't miss any deadlines.

Sugerencia: Give a clear method and one specific example. Use correct grammar and simpler phrasing. Explain steps logically with linking words (first, then, finally). Avoid filler words and repeated words.

Ejemplo: I usually use repetition and phone reminders to remember important tasks. For instance, I set an alarm or repeat the task to myself; if I forget something I sometimes scroll back through a TikTok video that reminded me of it, and then I remember what to do.

× For instance, when my friends forget something important, I mentioned them about this significant thing in their life, but usually I also got little bit errors.

✓ For instance, when my friends forget something important, I mention it to them about this significant thing in their lives, but usually I also make a few small mistakes.

The original uses 'mentioned' and 'got' incorrectly in context. The speaker is describing a habitual ability, so present simple is required ('mention' not 'mentioned'). 'Mentioned them about' is incorrect English; the correct pattern is 'mention something to someone'. 'Got little bit errors' is ungrammatical; use 'make a few small mistakes' for habitual errors. Also use plural 'lives' to match 'friends'. Suggestions: use present simple for habitual actions, use 'mention X to Y', and replace 'got little bit errors' with 'make a few small mistakes'.

× Yes I have. I one time I forget my best friend's birthday and I really, umm, have a regret about that because I have never forgotten about anything important as birthdays.

✓ Yes, I have. One time I forgot my best friend's birthday and I really regret that because I had never forgotten anything important like birthdays before.

The sentence mixes tenses improperly. For a specific past event, use simple past 'forgot' instead of 'forget'. Use 'regret' (simple present) or 'really regretted' depending on nuance; here 'I really regret that' is natural. 'Have a regret' is unnatural; use 'regret'. For the state before that event, use past perfect 'had never forgotten' to show that until that time it had not happened. Also 'like birthdays' is clearer than 'as birthdays'. Suggestions: use simple past for completed events, past perfect to indicate prior state, and natural collocations like 'regret that'.

× I need, I need to remember my homeworks were doing.

✓ I need to remember the homework I'm doing.

'Homeworks' is not standard; 'homework' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. The clause 'were doing' is incorrect for describing current tasks; use present continuous 'I'm doing' or 'I am doing' to indicate ongoing work. Also include 'the' before 'homework' if referring to specific tasks. Suggestions: use uncountable 'homework' and appropriate verb form (present continuous) for current activities.

× I prepared to the exams because it's really the main thing what I need to remember daily.

✓ I prepare for the exams because it's really the main thing that I need to remember daily.

The correct preposition with 'prepare' is 'prepare for', not 'prepared to'. Also tense should match habitual action: use present simple 'I prepare'. 'What I need to remember' is unnatural; use a relative pronoun 'that'. Suggestions: use 'prepare for the exams', present simple for habitual actions, and 'that' as the relative pronoun in this context.

× I start to repeat the things what I did.

✓ I start by repeating the things I did.

Use the gerund/participle structure 'start by doing' to express the method: 'start by repeating' rather than 'start to repeat' in this context. Also 'what I did' is informal; use the relative structure 'the things I did' without 'what'. Suggestions: use 'start by + -ing' and remove 'what' in such relative clauses.

× For example if I scroll, if me if I scroll something in Tiktok, if I forget to do something I go back and I back scroll the recommendations and after find that video and after that I remember what I should to what I should do.

✓ For example, if I scroll on TikTok and forget to do something, I go back and scroll through the recommendations to find that video, and then I remember what I should do.

Multiple pronoun and word-order errors: 'if me if I scroll' is ungrammatical; use 'if I scroll'. The preposition with 'scroll' is 'scroll on TikTok'. 'Back scroll' is incorrect; use 'go back and scroll through'. 'After find that video' needs a subject and verb form: 'to find that video' or 'and find that video'. 'What I should to what I should do' contains extra words and incorrect infinitive 'to'; correct is 'what I should do'. Suggestions: simplify clauses, use correct pronouns and prepositions, and use infinitive or coordinated verbs correctly (e.g., 'go back and scroll... to find...').