Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one brief reason with a linking word. Avoid filler sounds and unclear phrases. Use correct prepositions (interested in) and complete your thought.

Ejemplo: It depends — I’m good at memorising things that interest me. For example, when I enjoy a topic I pay more attention and can remember details easily, but I quickly forget information I find boring.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, realistic example and avoid confusing or contradictory phrases. Start with a direct Yes/No, then give one specific example with a reason if possible. Keep it to two or three sentences and remove repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. For instance, I once forgot an important appointment because I was distracted by work. Since then I try to set reminders so I don’t miss important events.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use specific examples of daily tasks. Use correct tense and clearer phrasing. Structure: one topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting examples with linking words (for example, such as).

Ejemplo: I need to remember my daily routine, especially tasks like cooking and housework. For example, I plan meals in the morning and make a short checklist of chores so I don’t forget anything important.

Sugerencia: This is a clear answer; expand slightly with one detail about how you take notes and a linking word to show effectiveness. Mention a specific method (phone reminders, lists, sticky notes) to show range of strategies.

Ejemplo: I keep notes to remember important things. For example, I use my phone to set reminders and keep a checklist app, which helps me stay organised and prevents me from forgetting tasks.

× When I feel interested on something, uh, I become good at memorizing that thing and when I don't feel any interest on that topic or on that, uh, moment, I become.

✓ When I am interested in something, I become good at memorizing it, and when I don't have any interest in a topic or in the moment, I don't.

Incorrect preposition: use 'interested in' not 'interested on'. Also 'memorizing that thing' is wordy; use 'memorizing it'. The final clause was incomplete and unclear; replace with 'I don't' to complete the contrast. Suggestions: use 'interested in' and keep pronouns concise.

× Indusind Pillai.

✓ (Remove or clarify — this appears to be extraneous and unrelated to the response.)

This fragment is not a grammatically complete sentence and does not fit the dialogue. It seems extraneous or a mis-speech. Suggestion: remove it or replace with a relevant phrase that completes the thought.

× Yes, it's quite regular event to me or regular thing to me as I sometimes forget something important like I usually forget to forget my husband.

✓ Yes, it happens quite regularly to me; I sometimes forget important things, like I often forget to call my husband.

Multiple structure and word choice problems: use 'happens regularly' instead of 'it's quite regular event to me'. 'Forget something important' should be pluralized as 'important things' for general statements (could also be singular depending on context). 'I usually forget to forget my husband' is incorrect and nonsensical; likely intended 'forget to call my husband'. Suggestion: rephrase for clarity and use correct verbs.

× Actually, I need to remember my daily routine in my daily life.

✓ Actually, I need to remember my daily routine.

Redundant phrasing: 'daily routine' already implies 'in my daily life'. Remove repetition for conciseness. Tense and meaning are fine.

× That's what I need to done, uh, all over the day.

✓ That's what I need to do throughout the day.

Incorrect verb form: use base verb 'do' after 'need to' (not 'done' which is past participle). 'All over the day' is unnatural; use 'throughout the day'. Suggestion: 'need to do throughout the day'.

× Something like what I need to cook, what I need to, uh, complete.

✓ For example, what I need to cook and what I need to complete.

Fragmented list and missing parallel structure. Use parallel gerunds/infinitives: 'what I need to cook' and 'what I need to complete'. Suggestion: keep items parallel and complete.

× Actually, I keep notes to remember something important, otherwise I forget that thing.

✓ Actually, I take notes to remember important things; otherwise I forget them.

Use 'take notes' or 'write notes' rather than 'keep notes' in this context. 'Something important' is vague; plural 'important things' fits general habit. Pronoun reference: use 'them' to refer back to 'important things'. Suggestion: use 'take notes' and consistent plural references.