Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
No.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
Yes.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
Eat, drink. Sleep.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
By typing in the iPhone.
Are you good at memorising things?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 回答过于简短且缺乏细节。建议先用一句主题句直接回答,然后补充一到两句说明,如你记忆的强项或弱项、原因或例子,并使用连接词使表达更自然。比如说明你在记忆人名或数字方面的能力,或提到你常用的记忆方法。
Ejemplo: Not really. I find it hard to remember long lists or numbers, but I’m pretty good at remembering faces and names because I make a mental association with something distinctive about each person.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: 回答太简短,应给出具体例子来支撑回答,说明你忘记了什么、后果以及你从中学到的东西。使用连接词(for example, because, so)让叙述更连贯。这样可以展示更丰富的内容和语言。
Ejemplo: Yes, I have. For example, I once forgot an important meeting because I mixed up the date, which caused me to reschedule and apologise to my manager, so now I always set multiple reminders in my phone.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Puntuación: 30.0Sugerencia: 回答太片面且不连贯。应用完整句子并展开说明,说明为什么这些事情需要记住,或列举更多日常需要记住的事项,如工作任务、约会、钥匙、密码等,并使用连接词如 moreover 或 also 增加细节。
Ejemplo: I need to remember basic routines like eating, drinking and getting enough sleep, but I also have to remember work deadlines, appointments and where I put my keys, so I usually keep a to-do list to stay organised.
How do you remember important things?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答明确但可以更自然、更具体。建议用完整句并说明具体方法(例如使用提醒、日历或备忘录),以及举例说明何时使用这些方法或它们的效果。这样能展示词汇和逻辑连接能力。
Ejemplo: I usually type important things into my iPhone using the calendar and reminders apps; for instance, I set an alert for appointments and add notes so I don’t forget deadlines.
× No.
✓ No, I'm not.
原句只有一个单词“No”,在回答“Are you good at memorising things?”这种是一般现在时的Yes/No问句时,回答通常需要完整主语和动词构成句子,或者至少使用缩略形式(如“I'm not”)。建议使用完整句或常见缩写,以符合口语习惯并保持句子完整。
× Yes.
✓ Yes, I have.
原句只有“Yes”,但问句是“Have you ever forgotten something important?”属于现在完成时,肯定回答应使用现在完成时的助动词(have/has)配合主语,例如“Yes, I have.”以保持时态一致。直接只说“Yes”虽然口语中可被接受,但不符合本任务要求的完整句子。建议用“I have”或“Yes, I have”回答。
× Eat, drink. Sleep.
✓ I need to eat, drink and sleep.
学生回答以词组列举,没有主语和谓语,使句子不完整。问句“What do you need to remember in your daily life?”要用一般现在时完整回答,表示日常需要记住的事情,应使用主语+动词原形(need to + 动词)。因此改为“I need to eat, drink and sleep.”更符合语法与语境。
× By typing in the iPhone.
✓ By typing it into my iPhone.
原句为介词短语,缺少指代对象且“in the iPhone”搭配不自然。通常说把内容“输入到手机里”应使用“type something into my iPhone”或用动名词结构“By typing it into my iPhone”。根据问句“How do you remember important things?”,用介词短语作方式说明时要完整表述并使用正确介词和物主代词。建议使用“By typing it into my iPhone.”