Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you are good at memorising. Use linking words to explain why and give a specific example. Reduce fillers (“umm”, “uh”) and avoid repetition. Keep answers within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I’m not especially good at memorising lots of information, but I can remember the important details for a few days. For example, I usually recall key facts for 2–3 days because I focus only on what’s necessary and discard unimportant details. This approach helps me avoid mental clutter.

Sugerencia: Give a brief, coherent narrative with a clear beginning, middle and end. Use past tense consistently and avoid repeating feelings without elaboration. End with a short reflection or lesson learned. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, once I forgot where I left my keys after walking my dog. I had placed them next to his harness and couldn’t find them the next day, which was very frustrating. Since then I made a habit of always putting my keys in the same place so I don’t lose them again.

Sugerencia: Start with one clear topic sentence listing the most important daily responsibilities. Provide specific reasons and avoid informal contractions and fillers. Use linking words (because, so) and correct grammar (e.g., ‘he is very active’). Keep it concise.

Ejemplo: I have several daily responsibilities, but the most important are feeding and walking my dog. I need to feed him on time because he becomes upset and loses energy, and I take him for walks because he is very active and needs exercise. These routines help keep him healthy and happy.

Sugerencia: Be clear about your method and give a simple, step-by-step explanation. Correct vocabulary (e.g., “list” not “lease”) and avoid vague or incomplete sentences. Use linking phrases (for example, first, then) and provide a concrete example of an item on your list.

Ejemplo: I usually make a list of tasks I need to complete each day to avoid forgetting anything. For example, I write down ‘cook dog food’ and ‘walk the dog’ and tick them off as I finish them. This simple routine helps me stay organized and reduces stress.

× Well, I'm not good at memorizing so many things in my head, but how often I do, umm, remember the important, uh, details after 2-3 days.

✓ Well, I'm not good at memorizing so many things in my head, but I often remember the important details after two or three days.

The original sentence has awkward word order and filler words. 'How often I do, umm, remember' is ungrammatical. Use the present simple adverb 'often' with 'I remember' to describe a habitual action. Also spell out numbers in speech writing ('two or three days') and remove unnecessary fillers for clarity.

× Umm, because it's helped me, uh, reduce the, uh, unnecessary information in my head.

✓ Umm, because it has helped me reduce unnecessary information in my head.

The phrase 'it's helped' is a contraction of 'it has helped', which is acceptable, but the original included extra commas breaking the clause. Use 'has helped' or 'it's helped' followed directly by the infinitive 'reduce' without extra commas. This is present perfect usage to describe a past action with present result.

× Well yes, I did forget where I left my key after walking my dog.

✓ Well, yes, I forgot where I had left my key after walking my dog.

When describing an event that happened before another past action, use the past perfect ('had left') for the earlier action and simple past ('forgot') for the later one. 'Did forget' is emphatic but unnecessary here; 'forgot' is more natural.

× I put it next to his umm harness.

✓ I put it next to his harness.

Remove the filler 'umm' and keep the pronoun 'his' correctly referencing the dog. The original had no grammatical error beyond disfluency; correction improves clarity and fluency.

× But then the next day I forgot where I left it and it was really annoying and I was really frustrated.

✓ But the next day I forgot where I had left it, and I was really annoyed and frustrated.

Use past perfect 'had left' for the earlier action. 'Annoyed' is a more natural adjective than 'annoying' to describe the speaker's feeling. Combine similar adjectives for conciseness.

× I wish I could have a better memorization to remember where I.

✓ I wish I had a better memory so I could remember where I left it.

'Memorization' is the process of memorizing; 'memory' is the ability. The clause 'to remember where I' is incomplete; add 'left it' to complete the thought. Also use past tense 'I wish I had' to express a present unreal desire.

× Well, there's so many things in my life that I need to remember.

✓ Well, there are so many things in my life that I need to remember.

Subject 'so many things' is plural, so use 'there are' not 'there's'. This is a common subject-verb agreement issue with 'there' constructions.

× I need to feed my dog on time and take him out for a walk because umm, he will be upset and umm not gonna be happy if I don't feed him on time.

✓ I need to feed my dog on time and take him out for a walk because he will be upset and not happy if I don't.

Remove disfluent fillers. Use 'not happy' instead of colloquial 'not gonna be happy' in semi-formal speech. The second clause can end with 'if I don't' because the action is implied; repeating 'feed him on time' is redundant.

× And uh, walking is very necessary for dog especially he very active.

✓ And walking is very necessary for dogs, especially because he is very active.

Use plural 'dogs' when speaking generally about the activity being necessary for the species. Alternatively, keep singular 'dog' but change structure: 'necessary for my dog'. Also add 'because' and the verb 'is' for the clause 'he is very active'.

× Well, I usually make a lease of things that I need to complete on a day.

✓ Well, I usually make a list of things that I need to complete in a day.

'Lease' is incorrect word choice; 'list' is intended. Use the prepositional phrase 'in a day' (or 'in a day') rather than 'on a day'. Also remove unnecessary article 'a' before 'list' if speaking generally; 'make a list' is correct.

× Uh, for instance, sometime I need, I have lots of things in my head that I want to do on my day up.

✓ For instance, sometimes I need to do a lot of things that I have in my head during the day.

Correct 'sometime' to 'sometimes' and reorder for natural word order. Use 'do a lot of things' and 'during the day' rather than 'on my day up' which is ungrammatical.

× I will usually, no doubt, uh, for instance, like cooking my dog food and, umm, for completing, uh, excitement from tutor was help me avoiding forgetting the task and.

✓ I will usually, for instance, cook my dog's food, and encouragement from my tutor helps me avoid forgetting tasks.

The original sentence is disfluent and contains multiple errors: possessive 'dog's', correct verb forms 'helps' (third person singular) and 'avoid' (base form after 'helps me'), and clearer noun choice 'encouragement' rather than 'excitement'. Remove trailing conjunction and fillers. Ensure subject-verb agreement and infinitive use after 'helps me'.