Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No) then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and pronunciation errors (e.g., 'membrane' → 'memorising') and reduce hesitation words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use a linking phrase when adding an example.

Ejemplo: I'm not particularly good at memorising things. However, if something is important I make a special effort to remember it; for example, I can still recall a childhood trip from over ten years ago because I took photos and kept a diary that helped me remember the details.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a clear example of a time you forgot something. Use linking words (because/so) correctly and avoid unnecessary hesitations. Be specific about what you forgot and what you do to prevent it in future. Keep the response to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I once forgot to submit an assignment on time because I relied on memory instead of writing it down. Since then, I always note deadlines in a notebook so I can check them each morning and avoid missing important tasks.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence about your daily responsibilities, then list specific items using linking words (for example, such as, and). Be concrete about how you organise them (e.g., a daily schedule, reminders). Limit to 3–4 sentences and remove filler words.

Ejemplo: As a student, I need to remember daily tasks such as homework, reading assignments, and preparing for presentations. For example, I make a daily schedule each evening and set phone alarms for deadlines so I can complete tasks on time.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence and then give specific methods and a brief reason why they work. Use linking words (for instance, because, so) and avoid tense inconsistency (use present simple). Keep it concise and natural.

Ejemplo: I usually write important items in a notebook because it's the most convenient way for me to keep track of tasks. For instance, I list deadlines and priorities each morning so I can review them and stay organised throughout the day.

× I'm actually not, I'm not very good at membrane things, but if there is anything that is very important, I will try my best to memorize and, uh, about my childhood in one thing I have remembered for more than 10 years.

✓ I'm actually not; I'm not very good at memorising things, but if something is very important, I will try my best to memorize it. For example, one childhood memory I have remembered for more than 10 years is...

The original sentence uses the incorrect word 'membrane' instead of 'memorising' (word choice error). Also it contains run-on structure and unclear reference 'about my childhood in one thing'; the correction replaces the wrong word, splits the sentence for clarity, and adds a clear pronoun 'it' to refer to the important thing. Suggestion: practice common verb collocations (memorize/memorise) and break long sentences into shorter, focused clauses. Note: This suggestion corresponds to vocabulary/word choice which falls under typical pronunciation/lexical errors not explicitly listed; apply corrections only to grammatical types from the provided list when possible.

× Actually, I really forgot something important because I have a habit of, uh, writing down the vital things on my notebook so that I will always remember to do that in the, uh, next few days.

✓ Actually, I once forgot something important because I have a habit of writing down vital things in my notebook so that I will remember them over the next few days.

Mixed tense and article/preposition errors: 'really forgot' can be kept but 'because I have a habit of writing down...' is fine; change 'on my notebook' to 'in my notebook' (preposition error) and 'so that I will always remember to do that in the next few days' is awkward — use 'remember them over the next few days'. The sentence is corrected to keep past reference 'forgot' while maintaining present habit 'I have a habit'. Suggestion: use 'in' with notebook and match pronouns (them) to plural 'vital things'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Actually, I really forgot something important because I have a habit of, uh, writing down the vital things on my notebook so that I will always remember to do that in the, uh, next few days.

✓ Actually, I really forgot something important because I have a habit of writing down vital things in my notebook so that I will remember them in the next few days.

The phrase 'on my notebook' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' when referring to writing inside a notebook. Also 'remember to do that' is vague; use 'remember them' to match 'vital things'. Suggestion: learn common preposition uses with stationery: 'in my notebook', 'on my phone'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× And now I'm still a student, so, uh, every day I have to remember my daily tasks, uh, including my homework and my preparation for the next presentation and so on.

✓ I'm still a student, so every day I have to remember my daily tasks, including my homework and my preparations for the next presentation.

The original sentence repeats filler words and contains a minor number agreement issue: 'my preparation' is better as 'my preparations' if referring to multiple tasks. Also remove 'and so on' to be concise. Suggestion: use plural 'preparations' when implying multiple actions and avoid redundant fillers. Grammar problem type ID:22

× As for the important things, I will try to write it down on my notebooks because I think it was one of the most convenient ways for me to help me to record the daily tasks.

✓ For important things, I try to write them down in my notebook because I think it is one of the most convenient ways for me to record daily tasks.

Multiple issues: 'write it down' should be 'write them down' to agree with plural 'things' (pronoun error), 'on my notebooks' should be 'in my notebook' (preposition and number), 'it was one' conflicts tense and subject — use 'it is one' or 'this is one' (present tense) and remove redundant 'to help me'. Also use plural agreement 'notebook' or 'notebooks' consistently. Suggestion: match plural/singular forms and simplify the clause: 'it is one of the most convenient ways to record daily tasks.' Grammar problem type ID:8