Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答は短く明確ですが、文法ミスと表現の不自然さがあります。より自然に聞こえるように、主語と動詞の時制を一致させ、詳細を一文か二文で付け加えてください。また「get high score」は不自然なので「get high scores」や「score highly」がよいです。例を挙げて具体性を増しましょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, I am fairly good at memorising things. For example, when I was a child I often scored highly on exams because I used mnemonic techniques and reviewed my notes every night.

Sugerencia: 基本は伝わりますが、表現をより自然で詳細にするために時制と語順を整え、理由や結果をつなぐ接続詞を使ってください。重要な情報（何の会議か、どんな影響があったか）を一つ加えると説得力が増します。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. About ten years ago I missed an important work meeting because I mixed up the dates, so my boss was very upset and I had to apologise and reschedule the presentation.

Sugerencia: 内容が不明瞭で文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。具体的で正しい語彙（"daughter's online lesson"）を使い、理由や頻度を示す表現で詳しく述べてください。1〜2の具体例で十分です。

Ejemplo: I need to remember many daily tasks, such as my daughter's online lessons. Sometimes I forget to help her log in, so she has occasionally missed a class, which worries me.

Sugerencia: 伝えたい内容は明確ですが、語順と語彙の誤り（"I and my birth"）があります。誰と確認するのかを正しく表現し、習慣を示す副詞や接続詞を使って流れを滑らかにしてください。また、ツールや方法（スマホアラーム、カレンダー）を具体的に挙げると良いです。

Ejemplo: Usually I make a task list for work and every Monday my boss and I review it together. I also set reminders on my phone and use a shared calendar to make sure I don't forget important items.

× Yes I am. When I was a child I could get high score for exam.

✓ Yes, I am. When I was a child I could get high scores on exams.

'Could get high score for exam' has several issues: countable noun 'score' should be plural 'scores' when speaking generally; the correct preposition is 'on' for 'scores on exams'; also include a comma after 'Yes' for natural punctuation. Suggestion: use 'high scores on exams' to sound natural and grammatically correct.

× Yes I have. About 10 years ago I missed my important job meeting. That's why my boss was upset.

✓ Yes, I have. About ten years ago I missed an important work meeting. That's why my boss was upset.

'10 years ago' should be written 'ten years ago' in formal writing (digits are acceptable but words are clearer). 'my important job meeting' is awkward: use 'an important work meeting' or 'an important job meeting'. Also include comma after 'Yes'. Suggestion: say 'an important work meeting' for natural English.

× A lot of thing, for example my daughter's online listen.

✓ A lot of things, for example my daughter's online lessons.

'A lot of thing' should be plural 'a lot of things'. 'online listen' is not correct; likely intended 'online lessons'. Suggestion: use plural nouns when speaking generally and use the correct vocabulary ('lessons').

× Sometimes I forget to support her so she missed last course.

✓ Sometimes I forget to support her, so she missed the last course.

Missing comma before coordinating conjunction 'so' improves readability. 'last course' needs definite article 'the' when referring to a specific course. Also context suggests past result, so 'missed the last course' is correct. Suggestion: include 'the' and a comma: '...so she missed the last course.'

× Usually I make a task list for my job and every Monday I and my birth check through it together.

✓ Usually I make a task list for my job and every Monday my partner and I check it together.

'I and my birth' is incorrect pronoun phrase; likely meant 'my birth' is a typo for 'my birth' -> 'my partner' or 'my boss' or 'my spouse' depending on context. Word order 'my partner and I' is more natural than 'I and my partner'. 'check through it together' is wordy; use 'check it together'. Suggestion: use correct person noun and natural word order: 'my partner and I' and 'check it together'.