Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you are good at memorising, then give one specific reason and a brief example. Avoid filler words (uh, like) and repetition. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use a linking word if adding a reason.

Ejemplo: Yes, I’m fairly good at memorising. For example, I often remember procedures and tasks after practising them a few times, which helps me perform well in exams and assignments.

Sugerencia: Clarify the situation with a clear, coherent sentence and include one specific detail (what you forgot and the consequence). Use linking words to explain the result and avoid vague phrases. Limit to 2–3 sentences and correct grammar (e.g., ‘faculty’, ‘forgot to drop a course’).

Ejemplo: Yes, once I forgot to drop a university course before the deadline, so I had to ask the faculty for special permission to withdraw. As a result, I had to provide an explanation and paperwork to avoid a failing grade.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence about daily reminders and provide one concrete example with purpose. Remove fillers and unnecessary repetition. Use a linking word to show reason or result, and keep it within 2–3 concise sentences.

Ejemplo: Every day I need to remember to submit my internship form because it’s required for my placement. If I submit it on time, I increase my chances of being accepted by the company.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence naming the method and then one specific detail about how you use it. Use linking words (for example, so) to explain the benefit. Avoid filler sounds and repeated words. Keep to 2–3 polished sentences.

Ejemplo: I use checklists to remember important tasks because I can tick off items as I complete them. For example, I write morning and evening tasks on my phone and review the list so nothing is missed.

× I think I excel at this, recalling things that I have done before, like I need some practicing.

✓ I think I excel at this, recalling things I have done before, but I need some practice.

The sentence uses 'practicing' incorrectly as a noun; 'practice' is the correct noun form. Also 'like' is informal and causes sentence fragment; replace with 'but' to contrast. Use 'things I have done' without 'that' for conciseness.

× But yeah, if I, uh, I think practice can make it perfect, OK.

✓ But yeah, I think practice can make it perfect.

Remove disfluencies ('if I, uh, I') for clarity. 'Practice' is correct noun; no -ing needed. Keep simple present 'can make' to express general truth.

× Yes I have like there was a harm that I forgot.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important before.

Original mixes present perfect 'I have' with past clause 'there was a harm' awkwardly. Use 'I have forgotten' (present perfect) to indicate past experience; 'harm' is inappropriate—use 'something important'.

× I need to unload the courses in my university studying.

✓ I needed to drop some courses in my university studies.

Use simple past 'needed' if referring to past event; 'unload' is incorrect collocation—use 'drop' or 'withdraw from' courses. 'Studying' should be plural noun 'studies'.

× So I need to have like special request for the facult tutor.

✓ So I needed to submit a special request to the faculty tutor.

Use 'a special request' with indefinite article. 'Facult' is misspelled; use 'faculty tutor'. Adjust tense to past 'needed' to match context.

× I need to send special request to the faculty so I can.

✓ I needed to send a special request to the faculty so I could.

Include article 'a' before 'special request' and use past tense 'needed'/'could' to complete the clause. 'So I can' is incomplete; 'so I could' matches past context.

× This day I have to submit the, uh, internship form every day, so I will have like somewhere to, umm, accept me eventually.

✓ These days I have to submit the internship form every day so I will have somewhere that can accept me eventually.

Use 'these days' to refer to current period. Remove filler words. 'Somewhere to accept me' is ungrammatical; use 'somewhere that can accept me' or 'an organization that will accept me'.

× So yeah, that's what I need to, uh, memorize this day and something like kind of basic.

✓ So yeah, that's what I need to memorize these days; it's something quite basic.

Change 'this day' to 'these days' for ongoing action. Remove filler language. 'Something like kind of basic' is vague and ungrammatical; use 'it's something quite basic'.

× I like to do the checklist because it can have the umm, I can see what I have done from the tick and what I haven't done from the umm the list that I have list before.

✓ I like to make a checklist because I can see what I have done from the ticks and what I haven't done from the list I made before.

Use 'make a checklist' not 'do the checklist'. 'It can have the umm' is unclear and removed. Use plural 'ticks' for items checked. 'The list that I have list before' is ungrammatical; use 'the list I made before' or 'previous list'.