Part 1
Examinador
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
Candidato
Why or why not? Yes, definitely, because during my studying time, if the book makes me anxious, I will eat some chocolate to realize my pressure.
Examinador
How often do you eat chocolate?
Candidato
It depends on the situation, but I usually eating some more chocolate before the exam because I usually don't eat some food before the test because I'm very anxious.
Examinador
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
Candidato
And yes, of course. And I think a lot of kids love chocolate because it is very sweet and delicious. If kids eat it, they will be happy.
Examinador
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
Candidato
I think the first point is chocolate tastes delicious and a lot of people loves chocolate tasty. And the second point is chocolate is a an energy of sauce. For example, if people don't eat some food in the morning, they can eat chocolate.
Examinador
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
Candidato
In my person I like milk chocolate best because I think dark chocolate is very bitter and but if eat some more milk the chocolate taste very delicious.
Examinador
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
Candidato
Yes, of course. Especially in Valentine's Day, a lot of boys buy chocolate for their girlfriends to express their loves.
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答时应避免重复问题,且表达更自然流畅。可以直接说明喜欢巧克力的原因,并用更准确的词汇表达缓解压力的方式。
Ejemplo: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it helps me relieve stress when I feel anxious while studying.
How often do you eat chocolate?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多,建议使用正确时态和句式,避免重复表达,并用连词使句子更连贯。
Ejemplo: I usually eat chocolate more often before exams because I tend to feel anxious and avoid eating other foods.
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答应避免使用口语填充词如“and”,并且可以提供更具体的细节来丰富内容。
Ejemplo: Yes, I often ate chocolate as a kid because its sweet taste always made me feel happy.
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答中语法和表达不准确,建议使用更准确的词汇和句式,避免重复,并用连词连接观点。
Ejemplo: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes delicious and provides a quick source of energy, especially when people skip meals.
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多,建议简洁表达喜好并用正确的比较结构说明原因。
Ejemplo: Personally, I prefer milk chocolate because dark chocolate tastes too bitter for me.
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答应注意冠词使用和复数形式,表达更自然,并可补充更多送巧克力的场合。
Ejemplo: Yes, I think chocolate makes a great gift, especially on Valentine's Day when many people give it to their loved ones to show affection.
× I usually eating some more chocolate before the exam because I usually don't eat some food before the test because I'm very anxious.
✓ I usually eat some more chocolate before the exam because I usually don't eat any food before the test because I'm very anxious.
这里动词后面不应该用-ing形式,应该用动词原形。'usually'后面接动词原形表示习惯动作。
× a lot of people loves chocolate tasty.
✓ a lot of people love chocolate's taste.
主语是复数people,谓语动词应该用复数形式love。
× chocolate is a an energy of sauce.
✓ chocolate is an energy source.
这里冠词使用错误,'a an'重复且不正确,且'sauce'应为'source'。
× In my person I like milk chocolate best because I think dark chocolate is very bitter and but if eat some more milk the chocolate taste very delicious.
✓ In my opinion, I like milk chocolate best because I think dark chocolate is very bitter, but if you add some more milk, the chocolate tastes very delicious.
'In my person'应为'In my opinion',缺少主语'you',动词时态和主谓一致错误。
× I usually don't eat some food before the test because I'm very anxious.
✓ I usually don't eat any food before the test because I'm very anxious.
否定句中应使用'any'而非'some'。
× a lot of boys buy chocolate for their girlfriends to express their loves.
✓ a lot of boys buy chocolate for their girlfriends to express their love.
'love'作为不可数名词,不用复数形式。