Chocolate— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to give a clear and consistent opinion without hesitation or contradictions. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'um' to sound more natural and confident. Keep your answer concise and directly address the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy eating chocolate because it tastes delicious and helps me relax after a long day. For example, I often buy a small chocolate bar after school as a treat.

Sugerencia: Be careful with pronunciation and word choice to avoid confusion (e.g., 'braces' instead of 'breasts brackets'). Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Provide a clear frequency and reason in a structured way.

Ejemplo: I don't eat chocolate very often because it's not very healthy, especially since I am wearing braces. Therefore, I usually have chocolate only once or twice a week.

Sugerencia: Try to use correct grammar and sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and clarify your points. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific details.

Ejemplo: When I was a child, my parents, especially my mother, were very strict about my diet. As a result, I didn't eat much chocolate because sweets were mostly forbidden.

Sugerencia: Reduce filler words and speak more fluently. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Provide clear reasons with specific vocabulary and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Chocolate is popular worldwide because many people love its taste. Moreover, it stimulates the release of happiness hormones like dopamine and endorphins, which makes people feel good.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and filler words. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use descriptive vocabulary to express your preferences more effectively.

Ejemplo: My favourite flavour of chocolate is white chocolate. I especially enjoy white chocolate combined with strawberries or in bubbly chocolate bars because of its creamy and sweet taste.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence structure and grammar for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples. Avoid vague phrases like 'a pretty' and be precise in your language.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think chocolate makes a great gift because many people enjoy it. For example, if you are unsure what to give someone, a nicely wrapped box of chocolates is a safe and appreciated choice.

× I always, uh, like run to the shop to buy some chocolate for me or, uh, after school, I love to buy sweets, but, uh, I don't think I'm a big fan of chocolate.

✓ I always, uh, like running to the shop to buy some chocolate for me or, uh, after school, I love to buy sweets, but, uh, I don't think I'm a big fan of chocolate.

The verb 'like' when followed by another verb should be followed by the gerund form (-ing). Therefore, 'like run' should be corrected to 'like running' to be grammatically correct.

× Not so often because I know it's not very healthy for me and also for my 2 teeth because now I'm wearing breasts brackets breasts and I I know that it can be not so healthy.

✓ Not so often because I know it's not very healthy for me and also for my two teeth because now I'm wearing braces and I know that it can be not so healthy.

The phrase 'breasts brackets breasts' is incorrect and likely a mispronunciation or misuse. The correct term is 'braces' when referring to dental devices. Also, '2' should be written as 'two' in formal writing. Pronoun usage is correct but the noun phrase was incorrect.

× My parents, especially my mom, was very strict about what I eat when I was a child.

✓ My parents, especially my mom, were very strict about what I ate when I was a child.

The subject 'parents' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' not 'was'. Also, the verb 'eat' should be in past tense 'ate' to match the past time frame 'when I was a child'.

× because my mom was always for it was forbidden for me to eat a lot of sweets.

✓ because my mom was always strict; it was forbidden for me to eat a lot of sweets.

The phrase 'was always for it was forbidden' is incorrect and unclear. It should be split into two clauses for clarity: 'was always strict' and 'it was forbidden'. This corrects the sentence structure and pronoun use.

× people all around the world, uh, really loves chocolate and uh, also, uh, it can raise, uh, level of, uh, your happiness hormones called dopamine, endorphin, uh, oxytocin.

✓ people all around the world, uh, really love chocolate and uh, also, uh, it can raise, uh, the level of, uh, your happiness hormones called dopamine, endorphin, uh, oxytocin.

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'love' not 'loves'. Also, 'level' should be preceded by the definite article 'the' to be grammatically correct.

× it can raise, uh, level of, uh, your happiness hormones called dopamine, endorphin, uh, oxytocin.

✓ it can raise, uh, the level of, uh, your happiness hormones called dopamine, endorphin, uh, oxytocin.

The noun 'level' is singular and specific here, so it requires the definite article 'the' before it.

× people loves to eat.

✓ people love to eat.

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'love' not 'loves'.

× my favorite flavor of chocolate is white chocolate.

✓ my favorite flavor of chocolate is white chocolate.

No correction needed here; the sentence is grammatically correct.

× I think yes, because I know that there is a lot of people that love chocolate and for instance, when you don't know what to give as a gift to someone, you can just give a pretty or buy a chocolate for this person and he will enjoy the taste of it.

✓ I think yes, because I know that there are a lot of people who love chocolate and, for instance, when you don't know what to give as a gift to someone, you can just buy a pretty chocolate for this person and they will enjoy the taste of it.

'There is a lot of people' should be 'there are a lot of people' because 'people' is plural. 'That' should be 'who' when referring to people. 'Give a pretty or buy a chocolate' is unclear; 'buy a pretty chocolate' is clearer. Also, 'he' should be 'they' to be gender-neutral and consistent.