Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'sounds is' nên là 'sound is'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói về cảm xúc khi hát hoặc lý do bạn không thích hát.

Ejemplo: I don't really enjoy singing because I find it difficult to control my pitch, which makes my voice sound unpleasant. However, I sometimes sing alone just for fun to relax.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu chủ đề và giải thích rõ ràng về việc học hát hoặc không học hát. Hãy tránh dùng các cụm từ không chính xác như 'think for too many times'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have tried to learn singing before, but I found it quite challenging and didn't enjoy the process, so I decided not to continue.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn, ví dụ 'the only ones who don't criticize my awful pitch'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn, tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như 'charge'. Hãy thêm chi tiết để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Ejemplo: I would like to sing for my parents because they are very supportive and never criticize my poor singing skills.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'will brings' nên là 'will bring'. Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và hoàn thiện câu cuối cùng. Hãy cung cấp ví dụ rõ ràng và cụ thể hơn để câu trả lời hiệu quả.

Ejemplo: I think singing can bring happiness depending on the type of song and its message. For example, listening to cheerful songs by artists like Taylor Swift can uplift people's mood, while scary music from horror movies might have the opposite effect.

× I try to sing for myself a lot of time but my tones are not too flexible and the sounds is just awful.

✓ I try to sing for myself a lot of times but my tones are not too flexible and the sounds are just awful.

The word 'time' should be plural 'times' because it refers to multiple occasions. Also, 'sounds' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× Yeah, as I mentioned earlier, I always try to think for too many times, but the outcome is what I did like much, so I'll never sing for once again.

✓ Yeah, as I mentioned earlier, I always try to think too many times, but the outcome is not what I liked much, so I'll never sing once again.

The phrase 'think for too many times' is incorrect; it should be 'think too many times'. Also, 'did like much' is incorrect past tense usage; it should be 'liked much'. The phrase 'for once again' is redundant; 'once again' suffices.

× Probably my mom and dad will be the best option for me to sing for because they are the only one who didn't charge my awful pitch when I'm singing.

✓ Probably my mom and dad will be the best options for me to sing for because they are the only ones who didn't criticize my awful pitch when I'm singing.

'Option' should be plural 'options' because it refers to two people. 'Only one' should be 'only ones' to agree with plural subject 'they'. Also, 'charge' is incorrect here; 'criticize' fits better.

× Probably my mom and dad will be the best option for me to sing for because they are the only one who didn't charge my awful pitch when I'm singing.

✓ Probably my mom and dad will be the best options for me to sing for because they are the only ones who didn't criticize my awful pitch when I was singing.

The verb tense should be consistent; 'when I'm singing' should be 'when I was singing' to match past context.

× It depends on the types of songs and also the topic it covers because every song has the underlying emotions that catch up the audience.

✓ It depends on the types of songs and also the topics they cover because every song has underlying emotions that catch the audience.

'Topic' should be plural 'topics' to agree with 'types of songs'. 'It covers' should be 'they cover' to agree with plural 'topics'. 'Catch up the audience' is incorrect; 'catch the audience' is correct.

× But for example hearing something made by Taylor Swift will brings other joy.

✓ But for example, hearing something made by Taylor Swift will bring other joy.

After modal verb 'will', the base form of the verb 'bring' should be used, not 'brings'.

× But there's also another music which it comes out straight from the horror movies that make every.

✓ But there's also other music that comes straight from horror movies and makes everyone scared.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'Another music' is incorrect; 'other music' is better. 'Which it comes out' is redundant; 'that comes' suffices. The sentence ends abruptly; it needs completion for clarity.