Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答は自然ですが、最後の文が不明瞭で文法的にも誤りがあります。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけ、冗長な部分を避けましょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relieve stress after a busy day. Also, singing with my friends is very enjoyable and makes me feel happy.

Sugerencia: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。正しい文法を使い、簡潔に自分の意見を述べる練習をしましょう。

Ejemplo: No, I haven't learned how to sing properly. I enjoy singing, but I'm not very good at it. I want to learn to sing well someday because I think people who can sing are really cool.

Sugerencia: 質問の意図に対して答えがずれており、意味が通じにくいです。質問に直接答え、具体的な理由や状況を付け加える練習をしましょう。

Ejemplo: I want to sing for myself because it helps me relax and forget about stress. Singing makes me feel peaceful and happy.

Sugerencia: 表現が不自然で、最後の例が意味不明です。具体的な例を挙げて、文法的に正しい文章を作ることを意識しましょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. Singing helps me feel relaxed and comfortable. For example, when I feel sad, I often listen to my favorite songs to cheer myself up.

× In singing a song helps me.

✓ Singing a song helps me.

The phrase 'In singing a song helps me' is incorrect because 'In' is unnecessary here. The gerund 'Singing' should be used directly as the subject of the sentence without the preposition 'In'.

× I'm really like singing a song, but I'm not good at singing.

✓ I really like singing a song, but I'm not good at singing.

The phrase 'I'm really like' is incorrect because 'like' is a main verb and should not be preceded by 'am'. The correct form is 'I really like'.

× I think a person who are good at singing is really cool.

✓ I think a person who is good at singing is really cool.

The relative pronoun 'who' refers to 'a person' which is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are' to agree in number.

× I want to think for myself because it helps me relax and relieve my stress from a busy day.

✓ I want to think by myself because it helps me relax and relieve my stress from a busy day.

The phrase 'think for myself' is incorrect in this context. The correct preposition is 'by' to indicate doing something alone or independently.

× When I'm singing a song, I can't forget about my stressful things, so I want to think for myself.

✓ When I'm singing a song, I can't forget about my stressful things, so I want to think by myself.

Same as above, 'think for myself' is incorrect here; 'think by myself' correctly expresses thinking alone.

× Songs are always standing by everyone.

✓ Songs are always there for everyone.

The phrase 'standing by everyone' is unnatural in this context. The idiomatic expression is 'there for everyone' to mean songs provide support or comfort.

× For example, when I feel sad I often listen to a purple songs to.

✓ For example, when I feel sad I often listen to purple songs too.

The article 'a' is incorrect before the plural noun 'songs'. Also, 'to' should be 'too' to mean 'also'. 'Purple' is used as an adjective here and is correct.