Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“seeing”应为“singing”，句子结构较为混乱。建议注意动词的正确使用，简洁明了地表达观点，并避免重复。

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing, especially since I was a child. I am a big fan of K-pop music, so I enjoy singing along to the melodies, even though I don't understand the Korean lyrics. When I was young, I dreamed of becoming a singer.

Sugerencia: 回答较为完整，但句子衔接稍显生硬。建议使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时注意语法，如“a very challenging”应为“very challenging”。

Ejemplo: To be honest, I have never learned to sing properly. I usually imitate the singer's style, but I find it difficult to control my voice and breathing. Therefore, I think becoming a professional singer is very challenging and requires a lot of practice and talent.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“Even I am very confident”不合逻辑，且句子结构不完整。建议简化句子，明确表达意图，并注意大小写和语法。

Ejemplo: To be honest, I don't plan to perform singing in front of many people. If I have to sing, I would choose my parents because I feel comfortable singing for them, even though I can't sing very well.

Sugerencia: 回答表达了观点，但用词和句子结构不够准确，如“deliver to any place of the world”表达不清。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，增强表达的逻辑性和自然度。

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it is an art form that transcends language barriers. Even if you don't understand the words, you can still feel the emotions conveyed, which can make people feel joyful.

× Yes, I do like seeing, especially when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I do like singing, especially when I was a kid.

这里'seeing'是动词的现在分词形式，但句意是表达喜欢唱歌，应该用'singing'。'seeing'意为看见，不符合语境。

× I'm always a big fan of K pop music, so when I I'm listening to the Korean song, I like to sing with the melody but maybe not the words because actually I don't know how to speak Korean.

✓ I'm always a big fan of K pop music, so when I'm listening to Korean songs, I like to sing with the melody but maybe not the words because actually I don't know how to speak Korean.

句中'I I'm listening'重复，应改为'I’m listening'。'the Korean song'应改为复数形式'Korean songs'，因为泛指多首歌曲。

× And when I was a kid I dreamed of becoming a singer.

✓ And when I was a kid, I dreamed of becoming a singer.

句中缺少逗号，影响句子结构清晰。

× To be honest, I have never learned how to sing properly.

✓ To be honest, I have never learnt how to sing properly.

'learned'和'learnt'都是learn的过去分词，英式英语中更常用'learnt'，根据语境选择一致。

× Because of this, I think becoming a professional singer is a very challenging and requires a lot of practice and talent.

✓ Because of this, I think becoming a professional singer is very challenging and requires a lot of practice and talent.

句中'the very challenging'结构不完整，'challenging'是形容词，前面不需要冠词'the'。

× MMM To be honest, I don't think I will have a singing performance for everyone.

✓ MMM, to be honest, I don't think I will have a singing performance for everyone.

句首'MMM'后应加逗号，'to be honest'作为插入语应小写且用逗号隔开。

× Even I am very confident.

✓ Even if I am very confident.

句中缺少连词'if'，导致句子不完整。

× So if I have to sing for maybe I will choose my parents.

✓ So if I have to sing for someone, maybe I will choose my parents.

句中缺少宾语，'sing for'后应接宾语。

× So to sing in front of my parents, I won't be ashamed.

✓ So when I sing in front of my parents, I won't be ashamed.

'to sing'不符合句意，改为'when I sing'更自然。

× Even I Can't Sing very well.

✓ Even if I can't sing very well.

缺少连词'if'，且'Can't'应小写。

× Yes, I believe that because singing is a kind of artwork that can deliver to any place of the world.

✓ Yes, I believe that because singing is a kind of art that can be delivered to any place in the world.

'artwork'通常指具体艺术品，'art'更适合抽象概念。'deliver'应被动形式'be delivered'，'to any place of the world'应改为'in any place in the world'。

× Even you don't know about the language, but we can still feel the emotion from the thing, so it will bring happiness to all the people.

✓ Even if you don't know the language, we can still feel the emotion from it, so it will bring happiness to all people.

缺少连词'if'，'about the language'应改为'the language'，'the thing'指代不明，改为'it'更合适。'all the people'改为'all people'更自然。