Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Ответ звучит естественно, но есть ошибки в грамматике и словоупотреблении, например, "listen me singing" должно быть "listen to me singing". Также стоит избегать лишних слов и сделать ответ более структурированным, например, начать с прямого ответа, затем добавить детали с использованием связующих слов.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing in my daily life. However, I prefer to sing alone because I feel shy when others listen to me. For example, I often sing in the shower or when I am studying.

Sugerencia: Ответ содержит много грамматических ошибок и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется использовать правильные времена и более четко выражать мысли, а также использовать связующие слова для логичности.

Ejemplo: Yes, I took singing lessons from the age of 13 to 15. Many tutors told me I had a great voice. However, as I grew older, I realized I was not very good, so I decided to quit.

Sugerencia: Ответ хороший, но можно улучшить связность и ясность, используя более подходящие связующие слова и немного упростить фразы для естественности.

Ejemplo: I would like to sing for my grandma because she has been my muse since childhood. Moreover, she has a great influence on my life, and I trust her with my secrets and my voice.

Sugerencia: Ответ содержит много пауз и неуверенности, а также грамматические ошибки. Рекомендуется говорить более уверенно, избегать лишних слов-паразитов и использовать связующие слова для логичности.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. In fact, scientists have shown that singing positively affects mental health and can create joy and excitement for both singers and listeners.

× I don't really like when someone listen me singing.

✓ I don't really like it when someone listens to me singing.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Also, 'someone' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'listens'. The phrase 'like when' is better expressed as 'like it when' for clarity.

× someone listen me singing

✓ someone listens to me singing

The verb 'listen' is always followed by the preposition 'to' when indicating the object of listening. Omitting 'to' is incorrect.

× When I was at about 13 to 15 age at this period I was going to a singing lessons, had many tutors and most of them said that I have really great voice.

✓ When I was about 13 to 15 years old, during this period I was going to singing lessons, had many tutors, and most of them said that I had a really great voice.

The phrase 'at about 13 to 15 age' is incorrect; it should be 'about 13 to 15 years old'. 'A singing lessons' is incorrect because 'lessons' is plural and should not have 'a'. The verb tense in 'I have really great voice' should be past tense 'I had a really great voice' to match the past context.

× I was going to a singing lessons

✓ I was going to singing lessons

The article 'a' is singular and cannot be used with the plural noun 'lessons'. Removing 'a' corrects the singular/plural mismatch.

× most of them said that I have really great voice

✓ most of them said that I had a really great voice

The verb 'have' should be in past tense 'had' to agree with the past tense 'said'. Also, 'voice' needs the article 'a' before it.

× But as I grew older I understood that I'm not really that good in it and kinda quit it because I didn't have I didn't see any.

✓ But as I grew older, I understood that I wasn't really that good at it and kind of quit because I didn't see any progress.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I'm' should be past tense 'I wasn't' to match 'grew older'. The phrase 'good in it' should be 'good at it'. 'Kinda' is informal and should be 'kind of'. The phrase 'I didn't have I didn't see any' is incomplete and unclear; adding 'progress' clarifies the meaning.

× good in it

✓ good at it

The correct preposition to use with 'good' when referring to skills or abilities is 'at', not 'in'.

× She's the only one that I could trust my secrets and probably my voice when I'm speaking, listening, singing.

✓ She's the only one to whom I could trust my secrets and probably my voice when I'm speaking, listening, or singing.

The relative pronoun 'that' is less formal here; 'to whom' is more appropriate when the verb 'trust' requires an indirect object. Also, the verb 'trust' should be followed by 'to' when indicating the person trusted. The list 'speaking, listening, singing' should be connected with 'or' for clarity.

× speaking, listening, singing

✓ speaking, listening, or singing

When listing alternatives, the conjunction 'or' is used before the last item to indicate choice or alternatives.

× the scientists have showed the statistic

✓ scientists have shown statistics

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'scientists' unless referring to a specific group. 'Showed' is the simple past; 'have shown' is present perfect, which fits better here. 'Statistic' should be plural 'statistics' to refer to data in general.

× the scientists have showed the statistic

✓ scientists have shown statistics

The verb 'show' in present perfect tense is 'have shown', not 'have showed'. Also, 'statistic' should be plural 'statistics' when referring to data.

× singing has great impact on our mental health

✓ singing has a great impact on our mental health

The noun 'impact' is countable here and requires the article 'a' before it.