Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答中多次将“singing”误说成“seeing”，影响了表达的准确性。建议加强发音练习，特别是区分相似音词。同时，回答中有重复词汇“and and”，需要注意语言的流畅性。内容方面，可以更具体地描述唱歌带来的感受或经历。

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel happy. On weekends, I often go to KTV with my classmates and sing for two or three hours, which is very enjoyable.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“very heavy academic”应为“heavy academic workload”。建议注意句子结构，避免语法错误。内容可以更具体说明学习压力大导致无法学习唱歌的原因。

Ejemplo: Actually, I have never learned how to sing because I had a heavy academic workload from primary school to university. Therefore, I devoted most of my time to studying and had no time to learn singing.

Sugerencia: 回答中多次将“sing”误说成“think”，影响理解。建议加强发音练习，特别是区分“sing”和“think”。内容表达不够连贯，建议使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ejemplo: Actually, I only want to sing for myself because I don't think my voice is very good. I feel shy when singing in front of others, so I prefer to sing alone.

Sugerencia: 回答中多次将“singing”误说成“seeing”，影响表达准确性。建议加强发音和流利度练习。内容方面，可以更具体说明唱歌如何减压和带来快乐。

Ejemplo: Yes, of course singing is a very pleasant activity. I think it helps people reduce stress and feel relaxed, so singing can bring happiness to everyone.

× Yes, I like seeing because I think seeing can make me relax and and happy.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I think singing can make me relax and happy.

这里的动词应该用动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事。原句中使用了“seeing”，应改为“singing”，因为题目是关于唱歌。

× At weekends, I often go to the KTV with my classmates to think about two or three hours.

✓ At weekends, I often go to the KTV with my classmates to sing for about two or three hours.

原句中“think about two or three hours”不符合语境，应为“sing for about two or three hours”，表示唱歌持续时间。

× Actually, I never learned how to sing because the, uh, very heavy academic from my primary school to my university.

✓ Actually, I never learned how to sing because of the very heavy academic workload from my primary school to my university.

缺少介词“of”来连接原因，且“academic”应为“academic workload”表示学业负担。

× So I devoted myself to into studying.

✓ So I devoted myself to studying.

“devote oneself to”后应接动名词，不能加“into”。

× Actually I only want to think for myself because I don't think my voice is very good.

✓ Actually, I only want to sing for myself because I don't think my voice is very good.

“think for myself”不符合语境，应为“sing for myself”，表示为自己唱歌。

× I will feel SH shy if I sing to others so I only want to think for myself.

✓ I will feel shy if I sing to others, so I only want to sing for myself.

“SH shy”应为“shy”，且“think for myself”应改为“sing for myself”。

× Yes, of course seeing is a very pleasant thing.

✓ Yes, of course singing is a very pleasant thing.

“seeing”应为“singing”，符合上下文语境。

× I think umm, people can reduce their stress and uh, make them relaxed when thinking, uh, when seeing.

✓ I think umm, people can reduce their stress and uh, feel relaxed when singing.

“make them relaxed”应改为“feel relaxed”，且“thinking”应为“singing”，保持语义一致。

× So I think seeing can bring happiness to everyone.

✓ So I think singing can bring happiness to everyone.

“seeing”应为“singing”，符合上下文语境。