Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some repetitions and minor grammatical errors that affect the natural flow. Try to avoid repeating words and ensure sentences are complete and grammatically correct. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and makes me happy. For me, singing is a form of self-expression, and I also like to dance while I sing, which adds to the enjoyment.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and contains some incomplete sentences and hesitations. Try to organise your ideas logically using linking words and avoid filler words. Also, be careful with verb tenses and sentence structure to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I haven't learnt how to sing formally, but I wanted to for a while. Unfortunately, I had some health problems at that time, so I postponed it. Later, I forgot about it, but now I am considering learning because I feel ready.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and includes supporting details, but some phrases are awkward or grammatically incorrect. Try to use more precise vocabulary and correct verb forms. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for myself because it makes me feel energised and free. Additionally, I like to sing lullabies to my baby, as I believe it can support her brain development.

Sugerencia: Your answer conveys the main idea but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Avoid repeating words and ensure sentences are complete. Use linking words to explain your points clearly and provide specific reasons.

Ejemplo: I think singing can help people feel happier because it is an enjoyable activity. Moreover, singing can reduce stress and anxiety, which contributes to a more relaxed life.

× I I think it's a kind of expression of freedom for me and also I like dancing with when I'm singing as well.

✓ I think it's a kind of expression of freedom for me and also I like dancing when I'm singing as well.

The phrase 'dancing with when I'm singing' is incorrect because 'with' is unnecessary and disrupts the sentence structure. Removing 'with' corrects the conjunction use and makes the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

× I haven't but I really wanted to learn for a while but unfortunately I had some health problem on that time.

✓ I haven't but I really wanted to learn for a while but unfortunately I had some health problems at that time.

The phrase 'on that time' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at' when referring to a specific time. Also, 'health problem' should be plural 'health problems' to match common usage when referring to multiple or unspecified issues.

× But maybe I can learn now because I I I'm pretty sure it.

✓ But maybe I can learn now because I'm pretty sure of it.

The phrase 'I'm pretty sure it' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct expression is 'I'm pretty sure of it' to properly use the verb 'sure' with the preposition 'of'.

× I want to sing for myself because it makes me energizing and feel free.

✓ I want to sing for myself because it makes me feel energized and free.

The phrase 'makes me energizing' is incorrect because 'energizing' is a present participle used as an adjective meaning 'causing energy'. The correct form is 'makes me feel energized' to express the effect on the subject. Also, 'feel free' is better as 'feel free' without 'and' to parallel 'feel energized'.

× Also I can sing to my baby because she's so young and if I sing lullaby for her I think it would help her brain development.

✓ Also I can sing to my baby because she's so young and if I sing a lullaby to her I think it would help her brain development.

The phrase 'sing lullaby for her' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'to' when referring to the person receiving the singing, and 'a' is needed before 'lullaby' as it is a singular countable noun.

× I think singing can can help the people feel happier because it is a fun skill and singing it can lead less stress and less anxiety life so.

✓ I think singing can help people feel happier because it is a fun skill and singing can lead to less stress and less anxiety in life.

The repeated 'can' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'can'. The phrase 'singing it can lead less stress' is incorrect; 'singing can lead to less stress' is correct, including the preposition 'to'. Also, 'less anxiety life' is incorrect; it should be 'less anxiety in life' to properly use the preposition and noun.