Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and natural, but it could be more concise and structured. Try to start with a direct answer, then add supporting details using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing, especially when I'm alone or showering because it helps me relax and brings me peace. However, I feel embarrassed to sing in front of others, so I usually keep quiet in public.

Sugerencia: Your answer is informative but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and by varying vocabulary. Also, try to avoid repeating words like 'class' and 'learned' closely together.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was in school, I attended a special music class where I picked up useful singing techniques. Even now, I apply those tips when I sing in the shower.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Try to directly answer the question first, then add supporting details with linking words to make your response more coherent and natural.

Ejemplo: I prefer to sing only for myself because I feel embarrassed singing in front of others. Therefore, I usually enjoy singing alone, which makes me feel comfortable and happy.

Sugerencia: Your answer conveys your opinion well but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and try to be more specific.

Ejemplo: Yes, I definitely believe singing can bring happiness to people. For instance, it helps me feel peaceful and joyful, refreshing my mind and calming my emotions.

× Yes, I like singing but when I'm alone or while showering, it just gives me peace and I enjoy it.

✓ Yes, I like singing, but when I'm alone or while showering, it just gives me peace and I enjoy it.

A comma is needed before 'but' when it connects two independent clauses to improve sentence clarity and correctness.

× Even now I use those while singing in shower.

✓ Even now I use those while singing in the shower.

The phrase 'in shower' is missing the definite article 'the'. The correct phrase is 'in the shower' because it refers to a specific place.

× Yes, definitely Singing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, definitely singing can bring happiness to people.

The word 'Singing' should not be capitalized mid-sentence unless it is a proper noun. Lowercase 'singing' is correct here.

× It kind of refreshes our mind and give us calm effect.

✓ It kind of refreshes our minds and gives us a calm effect.

The word 'mind' should be plural 'minds' to agree with 'our'. Also, 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'It'. Additionally, 'calm effect' needs the article 'a' to be grammatically correct.