Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons using simple linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid unnecessary words and focus on natural expressions.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax. For example, I enjoy singing in the bathroom because the sound echoes nicely, making it more enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and lacks clear structure. Start with a direct answer, then explain with specific details using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Try to avoid filler words and improve sentence clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have learnt how to sing. When I was young, I participated in a school singing competition, so I used YouTube to learn singing techniques and how to mix vocals.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Give a clear topic sentence answering who you want to sing for, then add specific reasons with linking words. Use correct pronouns and simple vocabulary to express your ideas naturally.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for my family, especially my husband. He enjoys listening to my songs because they make him happy.

Sugerencia: Your answer is difficult to understand and contains many errors. Start with a clear opinion, then explain with specific examples using linking words like 'because' or 'when'. Use simple and relevant vocabulary to express your ideas naturally.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when I am stressed, singing my favorite songs helps me feel joyful and relaxed.

× Yes, I really like singing when the boys.

✓ Yes, I really like singing with the boys.

The preposition 'when' is incorrectly used here; 'with' is the correct preposition to indicate doing an activity together with others.

× When I'm singing, it's next day feeling relaxed with chill.

✓ When I'm singing, I feel relaxed and chilled the next day.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unclear phrasing. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses proper sentence structure.

× I especially enjoy while I'm singing in bathroom because in bathroom there are, uh, the sound is a little bit appealing.

✓ I especially enjoy singing in the bathroom because the sound there is a little bit appealing.

The phrase 'enjoy while I'm singing' is incorrect; 'enjoy singing' is correct. Also, 'in bathroom' should be 'in the bathroom' to use the definite article properly.

× Uh, when I was young, uh, there are in my school, there is a singing competition and I open YouTube and I learn how to sing and how to, uh, mix vocal and, uh, vocal and experience.

✓ Uh, when I was young, there was a singing competition at my school and I opened YouTube to learn how to sing and how to mix vocals and gain experience.

The tense of 'there are' is incorrect for past time; it should be 'there was'. Also, 'open' and 'learn' should be in past tense 'opened' and 'learned' to match the past context.

× I would like to see my family and husband's boys.

✓ I would like to see my family and my husband's boys.

The possessive 'husband's' needs a possessive determiner 'my' before it to be grammatically correct.

× My husband likes to listen my songs because it's uh, my umm, feel that is not good.

✓ My husband likes to listen to my songs because, uh, my feeling is not good.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Also, 'feel' should be 'feeling' to be a noun here.

× But she would like to listen my every age, every single song, yes.

✓ But he would like to listen to every single one of my songs at every age, yes.

The pronoun 'she' is incorrect if referring to husband; it should be 'he'. Also, 'listen' requires 'to'. The phrase is restructured for clarity.

× Yes, of course the game can bring happiness to people, especially for me it up in flaws of happiness and joyful.

✓ Yes, of course singing can bring happiness to people, especially for me it brings feelings of happiness and joy.

'The game' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'singing'. 'It up in flaws of happiness and joyful' is unclear and incorrect; corrected to 'it brings feelings of happiness and joy'.

× When I'm stressed, I feel uh, YouTube from background music and I love to sing music uh, Singapore colors.

✓ When I'm stressed, I feel relaxed listening to background music on YouTube and I love to sing songs like 'Singapore Colors'.

The phrase 'I feel YouTube from background music' is incorrect. The correction clarifies the intended meaning using proper prepositions and word order.