Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ nối để câu văn tự nhiên hơn. Hãy chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm để tránh gây hiểu nhầm.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress after studying. I believe everyone should try singing as it is enjoyable and helps forget the tiredness of the day.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn, tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và có ý nghĩa hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have learned how to sing through online tutorials. I practiced breathing techniques to improve my singing, which was an interesting experience.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần được tổ chức lại để rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Hãy chú ý ngữ pháp, sử dụng đại từ phù hợp và tránh lỗi phát âm để truyền đạt ý tốt hơn.

Ejemplo: I used to sing for my grandparent when I was younger. Unfortunately, she passed away six years ago, so I cannot sing for her anymore. I feel sad about that, but I keep her memory in my heart.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và dễ hiểu hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and recover from a tiring day. The melody can soothe the mind and make people feel joyful.

× I think singing's help me relax and uh, recover from stressed umm, when I studied umm, I think everybody should uh, try singing because it's so funny and have you like uh, forgot every tiring from the day.

✓ I think singing helps me relax and recover from stress. When I studied, I think everybody should try singing because it's so fun and helps you forget all the tiredness from the day.

The verb 'help' should be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. 'Recover' should be in base form after 'helps me'. 'Stressed' is an adjective but here the noun 'stress' is needed. 'Funny' is incorrect; 'fun' is the correct adjective to describe enjoyment. 'Have you like uh, forgot every tiring' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'helps you forget all the tiredness'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I have. I learned it from the Internet. Uh, I learned how to take a breath, a deep breath to things more clearly, more, umm, better than and I think it's worse. So interesting experience.

✓ Yes, I have. I learned it from the Internet. I learned how to take a deep breath to do things more clearly and better. I think it was a very interesting experience.

The phrase 'a breath, a deep breath to things more clearly' is awkward; it should be 'take a deep breath to do things more clearly'. 'More, umm, better than and I think it's worse' is unclear and incorrect; it is corrected to 'and better'. 'So interesting experience' lacks an article and verb; corrected to 'It was a very interesting experience'.

× I wanna thanks for my grandparent when I was most I always sing for him, but now she has dead for six years so I cannot sing for him anymore.

✓ I want to thank my grandparents. When I was young, I always sang for them, but now they have been dead for six years, so I cannot sing for them anymore.

'Wanna thanks for' is incorrect; it should be 'want to thank'. 'Grandparent' should be plural 'grandparents' if referring to both. 'When I was most' is unclear; corrected to 'when I was young'. Pronouns 'him' and 'she' are inconsistent; corrected to 'them' and 'they' to match plural 'grandparents'. 'Has dead' is incorrect; correct form is 'have been dead' or 'have died'.

× I was so sad for that, but I think that's in a in somewhere.

✓ I was so sad about that, but I think it's somewhere in me.

'Sad for that' should be 'sad about that'. 'That's in a in somewhere' is unclear and ungrammatical; corrected to 'it's somewhere in me' to express the feeling remains inside.

× Yes, of course singing can bring happiness to people is help you relaxed. Have you recovered from the days the can't be like the melody kept you relaxed so so much.

✓ Yes, of course singing can bring happiness to people. It helps you relax. It helps you recover from the day's stress. The melody keeps you relaxed so much.

The original sentence is a run-on and ungrammatical. 'Is help you relaxed' is incorrect; corrected to 'It helps you relax'. 'Have you recovered from the days the can't be like' is unclear; corrected to 'It helps you recover from the day's stress'. 'The melody kept you relaxed so so much' corrected to 'The melody keeps you relaxed so much' for tense consistency and clarity.