Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence and correct grammar. Keep it concise (≤5 sentences). Use linking words and specific examples: mention which genres you like and a brief reason how singing helps you, correcting verb forms and redundancy (e.g., “helps help”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing, especially pop and folk songs, because it helps me relax after a busy day. For example, singing for 10–15 minutes during a break reduces my stress and helps me concentrate on work or study.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with correct tense and clearer phrasing. Use a topic sentence then a brief supporting detail about future plans. Avoid awkward expressions like “in my life” and include linking words (e.g., however, but).

Ejemplo: No, I have not had formal singing lessons, but I would like to learn in the future. If I get the chance, I plan to take weekly voice lessons to improve my technique and sing classical pieces.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence naming the people, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Fix repetition and grammar (e.g., “we sing a lot of songs,” “they tell me my voice is good”). Keep it under five sentences.

Ejemplo: I like to sing for my family, especially my sister, because we often sing together at family gatherings. They encourage me a lot and frequently tell me my voice sounds good, which motivates me to practice more.

Sugerencia: Give a concise opinion sentence then support it with one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar and awkward phrases (e.g., “bring helping to happiness,” “when people are saying they it get a chance”). Use examples or results to be more convincing.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think singing can make people happier because it reduces stress and boosts confidence. For instance, singing in a choir can create a sense of community and help members feel more positive after rehearsals.

× Yes, surely I like sing different kind of songs because it helps help me to reduce my stress during my work time and my study.

✓ Yes, surely I like singing different kinds of songs because it helps me reduce my stress during work and study.

Use the gerund 'singing' after 'like' (verb + -ing). 'Different kinds' requires plural 'kinds'. Remove the duplicate 'help' and use the infinitive 'to reduce' or the bare verb 'reduce' after 'helps'; 'helps me reduce' is natural. 'During my work time and my study' is awkward; use 'during work and study' for clarity.

× Like in my life I didn't get a chance to learn a song or any particular classic song, but in future when I get a chance I definitely do it.

✓ In my life I haven't had a chance to learn a song or any particular classical song, but in the future when I get a chance I will definitely do it.

Use present perfect 'haven't had' to refer to life experience up to now. Use the adjective 'classical' instead of 'classic' for music. Add the article 'the' before 'future'. For the future action use 'will definitely do it' to match the intended future meaning.

× In my family I really like to sing with my sister as we have a goodbye together so we sing lot of music and I really like to sing for my parents, family and friends because they always support me to sing more.

✓ In my family I really like to sing with my sister because we have good times together, so we sing a lot of songs, and I also like to sing for my parents, other family members, and friends because they always encourage me to sing more.

Replace 'as we have a goodbye together' (incorrect preposition and word choice) with 'because we have good times together'. Use 'a lot of' and 'songs' (countable). 'Parents, family and friends' is repetitive; clarify with 'other family members'. Use 'encourage me to sing' instead of 'support me to sing' for correct verb + infinitive usage.

× They always ask me that you are doing good and your voice is very good about in singing.

✓ They always tell me that I am doing well and that my singing voice is very good.

Use 'tell' rather than 'ask' when reporting encouragement. Use the adverb 'well' after 'doing'. 'Your voice is very good about in singing' is ungrammatical; use 'my singing voice is very good' or 'I have a very good singing voice'.

× According to my opinion, I think that singing can bring helping to happiness to people because when people are saying they it get a chance to reduce their stress during their work time and study time and as well as it also show their internal talent about in this singing line.

✓ In my opinion, I think that singing can bring happiness to people because it gives them a chance to reduce stress during work and study, and it also shows their inner talent in singing.

'According to my opinion' is redundant; use 'In my opinion'. Remove extra words like 'helping' and correct 'bring happiness'. Simplify the clause 'when people are saying they it get a chance' to 'it gives them a chance'. Use 'reduce stress' and 'during work and study'. Replace 'internal talent about in this singing line' with 'inner talent in singing' for clear, grammatical expression.