Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 用词和句子结构有多处错误（如“saying/seeing”应为“singing”），句子重复且有些冗长。回答应更直接，用一到两句概述喜好，再用一两句具体举例说明频率和原因，使用连接词使表达更连贯。注意发音和动词形式，控制在最多五句内。

Ejemplo: Yes, I love singing. I usually sing at home three to four times a week because it helps me relieve stress and clear my mind. For example, after a long day at work I’ll sing for 20–30 minutes to relax and improve my mood.

Sugerencia: 时态和表达不够准确（如“I'm fond of staying with”应改为过去时或更自然表达），句子有重复信息。回答应先明确学过，再说明具体方式、频率和平台，使用连接词如“so”或“therefore”使逻辑清楚。避免冗长说明同一事实。

Ejemplo: Yes, I took some informal lessons in high school. My friend Amy and I often searched for singing tutorials on an app called Little Red Book, so on weekends we practiced together using online videos to improve our technique.

Sugerencia: 表达不准确且有语法错误（如“complain”用词错误，应该是“support”或“help”），信息重复。建议先直接回答要为谁唱，然后简要说明原因和歌曲名，原因要具体且用词准确，保持句子简洁。

Ejemplo: I would like to sing for my best friend Amy. We grew up together, so I’d sing a song called "Storm" to thank her for always supporting me and being there during difficult times.

Sugerencia: 总体观点明确但多次把“singing”错写为“saying”，句子有些重复。建议先给出直接观点，然后用一到两句具体解释和举例，使用连接词（e.g. "also", "for example"）增强逻辑性，注意词汇准确。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think singing can make people happier. It’s a relaxing way to release emotions, and a powerful melody or meaningful lyrics can lift your mood. For example, I often feel cheerful after singing an upbeat song with friends.

× Yes, I'm passionate about saying about three to four times a week at home because seeing can help me release my emotions and pressure.

✓ Yes, I'm passionate about singing about three to four times a week at home because singing can help me release my emotions and pressure.

句中多次将“singing”误拼为“saying/seeing”；这里需要动名词（verb + -ing）作介词about的宾语以及在because从句中作主语，正确形式为singing。建议注意动词-ing形式的拼写，尤其s‑开头的单词。

× That's contributing my mental health.

✓ That contributes to my mental health.

原句中动词contribute常与介词to连用（contribute to sth.），且此处表一般事实应采用一般现在时。原句用现在进行且缺少介词，改为“That contributes to my mental health.” 更自然。建议记住固定搭配contribute to。

× During saying I can clear my mind.

✓ While singing, I can clear my mind.

“During”后通常接名词或名词短语（during the lesson），而这里要表达“在唱歌的时候”更自然的是使用while + 动词-ing或during + 名词。且动词要用singing而非saying。建议用 while singing 或 during singing（更常见是 while singing 或 during the song）。

× Yes, when I was in high school, I'm fond of staying with my best friend Amy.

✓ Yes, when I was in high school, I was fond of staying with my best friend Amy.

句子描述过去的习惯或状态，应使用过去时（was）而不是现在时（I'm/ am）。因此将I'm fond 改为 I was fond。建议区分时间状语和动词时态一致：过去时间用过去时。

× We often searched some resources and learning video on an app called Little Red Book, and in weekends we often learned about how to sing online.

✓ We often searched for some resources and learning videos on an app called Little Red Book, and on weekends we often learned how to sing online.

问题包括动词短语search的搭配应为search for，名词复数视频应为videos；learning video作为短语不恰当，改为 learning videos 或 instructional videos；时间状语用 on weekends 而不是 in weekends；learned about how to sing 改为 learned how to sing（learn 后可直接接不定式或名词）。建议注意固定搭配（search for）、复数形式和时间介词用法。

× We grew up in the same neighborhood, therefore we are the best friends from a young age.

✓ We grew up in the same neighborhood; therefore, we have been best friends since a young age.

原句时态与连词使用不自然。应使用“have been”表示从过去延续到现在的状态，并用 since 来说明起始时间（since a young age）。另外“the best friends” 不需定冠词且更自然说“best friends”。建议使用现在完成时表示从过去持续到现在的关系，并用since 表示起点。

× I want to sing a song called Storm for her to thank her for her complain.

✓ I want to sing a song called "Storm" for her to thank her for her support.

原句中 complain（抱怨）用作名词不恰当，且逻辑上感谢某人通常是感谢他们的支持、帮助或陪伴，而不是感谢抱怨。若原意是“感谢她的陪伴/帮助”，应改为support/help/companionship。同时保留动词不定式结构“to thank her”。建议选择合适的名词表达感谢的对象。

× Yes, sure, from my perspective saying it's a relaxing process to release your emotions.

✓ Yes, sure, from my perspective singing is a relaxing process to release your emotions.

同样将saying误用，应为动名词singing作为主语。注意拼写并用动名词表概念性动作。建议多练习动名词用法。

× Moreover, when you are saying you can be moved by a powerful melody or lyrics that can help you be happy.

✓ Moreover, when you are singing, you can be moved by a powerful melody or lyrics, which can help you feel happier.

原句中saying拼写错误且从句结构不流畅。改用singing，并将后半句改为非限定性定语从句或并列句以提高连贯性；feel happier 比 help you be happy 更地道。建议注意从句连接和形容词/副词比较用法。