Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Fix basic grammar (use subject-verb agreement and correct prepositions) and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and improves my mood. For example, when I feel stressed I listen to music and sing along, which calms me and boosts my energy.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, correct verb tense and clarify meaning. Use a linking word to explain the reason and give a brief specific detail about how you practice casually if relevant.

Ejemplo: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons because I was not very interested in joining singing classes. I do sing informally at home or with friends for fun.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear conditional sentence and correct grammar. Give one or two specific reasons using linking words (because, and) and simplify phrasing to avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would like to sing for my mother because she has always supported me. Also, I would sing to show my appreciation for everything she does.

Sugerencia: Make a direct, clear statement and give a coherent reason. Fix unclear phrases and use linking words. Provide a specific example of how singing spreads happiness instead of fragmented ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think singing can make people happy because music expresses emotions that words sometimes cannot. For example, singing at a family gathering often lifts everyone's mood and encourages smiles and conversation.

× Yes I do singing help me to release my mind other than that it will make my mood better.

✓ Yes, I do. Singing helps me to relax, and it also improves my mood.

The original sentence misuses 'do' with 'singing' and lacks proper clause separation. Use 'do' as a short answer ('Yes, I do.') and use the gerund 'Singing' as a subject with correct verb agreement 'helps'. Replace 'release my mind' with 'relax' for natural expression and add conjunction 'and' to connect ideas.

× For example when I said I like to hear to music and sing it.

✓ For example, when I said I like to listen to music and sing along.

Use the verb 'listen' with the preposition 'to' ('listen to music') not 'hear to'. Also use the expression 'sing along' to indicate singing with music. Add a comma after 'For example' for clarity.

× No, I never learn how to sing because I'm not too interested in taking part of seeing activities.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because I'm not very interested in taking part in singing activities.

Use present perfect 'have never learned' to express life experience. 'Learn' should be past participle 'learned' (or 'learnt'). Replace 'taking part of' with correct preposition 'taking part in'. 'Seeing activities' is incorrect; it should be 'singing activities'. Also 'not too interested' is better phrased as 'not very interested'.

× I just sing for fine.

✓ I just sing for fun.

'Fine' is the wrong word here. The correct adverb/noun is 'fun' to express enjoyment. The sentence then becomes natural and grammatically correct.

× If I had if I have a chance, I want to sing to my mother.

✓ If I have a chance, I want to sing for my mother.

Original repeats conditional phrases and mixes tenses. Use a single correct conditional 'If I have a chance' (present/future possibility) and the verb 'sing for' is more natural than 'sing to' in this context.

× This is because she is someone that always support and be with me.

✓ This is because she is someone who always supports me and is with me.

Use 'who' for people (not 'that'). Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'she... supports'. Use parallel verbs 'supports' and 'is' to correctly convey ongoing support.

× Other than that, I also want to in express my appreciation.

✓ Other than that, I also want to express my appreciation.

Remove the incorrect preposition 'in' before 'express'. The verb 'want to express' is the correct infinitive structure.

× Yes I do singing and hug or can spread happiness to others.

✓ Yes, I do. Singing and hugging can spread happiness to others.

Use 'do' as a short answer ('Yes, I do.'). Make 'singing and hugging' parallel gerunds as subjects and use 'can spread' after them. Remove the extra 'or' which made the sentence ungrammatical.

× This is because they have. Indonesian and expression that.

✓ This is because Indonesians have many expressions of emotion.

The original is fragmented and unclear. Combine fragments into a complete sentence. Use the plural noun 'Indonesians' and a clear predicate 'have many expressions of emotion' to convey the intended meaning.