List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more effectively. For example, instead of saying 'I make a list when I saw', say 'I make a list when I shop'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need and shop efficiently. I usually carry the list with me to the supermarket and follow it to find items quickly.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Try to express your ideas more clearly and logically. Use linking words to connect your thoughts and explain why the list does or does not work. Avoid repeating the same idea without explanation.

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work, but sometimes it does not work as planned because unexpected tasks come up. However, making a list helps me stay organized and manage my time better.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains incorrect words like 'leads' instead of 'lists'. Try to use precise vocabulary and explain your ideas clearly. Also, use linking words to connect your points logically.

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they feel that lists are restrictive or not always helpful. For example, if they cannot find everything on the list, they may get frustrated, so they prefer to be more flexible.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more formal language and avoiding repetition. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ejemplo: I usually prefer to make lists on my phone because paper lists can easily be lost. Since I always carry my phone, I find it more convenient and reliable to use digital lists.

× Yes, I make a list when I saw because it helps me to know the things and keep the things easily.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me to know the things and keep the things easily.

The verb 'saw' is past tense and does not fit the present tense context of the sentence. The correct verb should be 'shop' to match the present tense and meaning of making a list when shopping.

× If I go to the supermarket, I usually carry a list along with me and go to the places where it is found.

✓ If I go to the supermarket, I usually carry a list with me and go to the places where the items are found.

The phrase 'carry a list along with me' is redundant; 'carry a list with me' is sufficient. Also, 'where it is found' is unclear; it should be 'where the items are found' to specify the places of the things on the list.

× Yes, I make a list for my work but it never works because nothing happens at the time and as we make the things to work.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work but it never works because nothing happens on time and as we expect things to work.

The phrase 'nothing happens at the time' is incorrect; 'on time' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, 'as we make the things to work' is unclear and ungrammatical; it should be 'as we expect things to work' to convey the intended meaning.

× Some people don't like making leads because nothing in the list can be found everywhere.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because not everything on the list can be found everywhere.

The word 'leads' is incorrect; it should be 'lists'. Also, 'nothing in the list can be found everywhere' is awkward; 'not everything on the list can be found everywhere' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Some in different field like shopping or working.

✓ Some are in different fields like shopping or working.

The sentence is incomplete and missing the verb 'are'. Also, 'field' should be plural 'fields' to match 'some'. This correction fixes sentence structure and pluralization.

× So if they don't find anything they can be arrogant.

✓ So if they don't find anything, they can become frustrated.

The word 'arrogant' is not appropriate in this context; 'frustrated' better expresses the likely emotion when things are not found. Also, a comma is needed after the conditional clause for clarity.

× I usually prefer to make list on a phone 'cause a paper may be lost.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on my phone because a piece of paper may be lost.

The phrase 'make list' needs the article 'a' before 'list'. Also, 'on a phone' is less natural than 'on my phone' to indicate personal possession. 'Cause' should be expanded to 'because' for formal correctness.

× A piece of paper may be lost anywhere if we make in paper, but phone is with us every time and everywhere we go.

✓ A piece of paper may be lost anywhere if we use paper, but the phone is with us all the time and everywhere we go.

The phrase 'if we make in paper' is incorrect; it should be 'if we use paper'. Also, 'phone is with us' needs the definite article 'the phone'. 'Every time' is better expressed as 'all the time' in this context.

× So yeah, I usually prefer making list on a phone rather than on paper.

✓ So yeah, I usually prefer making a list on my phone rather than on paper.

Again, 'making list' requires the article 'a'. Also, 'on a phone' is less natural than 'on my phone' to indicate personal possession.