List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and redundant phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific examples to enrich your answer.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy. For example, when I visit the market, I check my list on my phone to ensure I don't forget anything important.

Sugerencia: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain how the list helps you organize your work and give specific details about its benefits.

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize tasks efficiently. For instance, it reminds me of meetings and deadlines, ensuring I complete everything on time.

Sugerencia: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid vague phrases. Use linking words to connect reasons logically and provide specific reasons why some people avoid making lists.

Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it takes too much time. Additionally, they might trust their memory more and prefer to remember tasks without writing them down.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more fluent by using linking words and clearer explanations. Avoid repetition and explain why using a phone is more convenient with specific reasons.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. For example, I don't have to carry extra paper, and I can easily edit or save my notes anytime.

× Yes, I'd like to make the list when I go for shopping and it's, uh, the easiest way to purchase the stuff and keep remember in, in my notes.

✓ Yes, I'd like to make the list when I go shopping and it's, uh, the easiest way to purchase the stuff and keep remembering in my notes.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' which uses the verb + -ing form. Also, 'keep remember' should be 'keep remembering' to use the correct verb form after 'keep'.

× So I most of the time when I go to Marquis, I go with my notes and it's helpful for me to remind the things and buy it.

✓ So most of the time when I go to Marquis, I go with my notes and it's helpful for me to remember the things and buy them.

The phrase 'helpful for me to remind the things' is incorrect; it should be 'helpful for me to remember the things'. Also, 'buy it' is incorrect when referring to multiple things; 'buy them' is correct.

× Yes, I make a list for my work and it's really helpful and it's work a lot to remind me the things and the talks to arrange my work on the time, so it's useful for me.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work and it's really helpful and it works a lot to remind me of the things and the tasks to arrange my work on time, so it's useful for me.

The phrase 'it's work a lot' should be 'it works a lot' to agree with the singular subject. Also, 'remind me the things' should be 'remind me of the things'. 'The talks' is likely a mistake for 'the tasks'. 'On the time' should be 'on time'.

× Ah well it depends on some people do not like to make the list, maybe due to lack of time so or maybe they do not have to note everything on the list and make the notes.

✓ Ah well, it depends; some people do not like to make the list, maybe due to lack of time, or maybe they do not have to note everything on the list and make the notes.

The sentence structure is incorrect and confusing. Adding proper punctuation and conjunctions clarifies the meaning. 'Depends on some people do not like' should be 'depends; some people do not like'. Also, 'so or maybe' is incorrect; 'or maybe' is sufficient.

× It's depend on their memories, maybe they can keep everything else safe.

✓ It depends on their memories; maybe they can keep everything else safe.

'It's depend' is incorrect; the correct form is 'It depends' to agree with the singular subject. Also, a semicolon or period improves sentence clarity.

× Well, I personally prefer to make the list on a phone and not on a paper because it's also kind of responsibility.

✓ Well, I personally prefer to make the list on my phone and not on paper because it's also a kind of responsibility.

The phrase 'on a phone' is better as 'on my phone' to indicate possession. 'On a paper' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on paper' without an article. Also, 'kind of responsibility' should be 'a kind of responsibility'.

× If I make the notes or less on the paper, I have to take this with me as well.

✓ If I make the notes or list on paper, I have to take it with me as well.

'Or less' is likely a typo for 'or list'. 'On the paper' should be 'on paper'. 'Take this' should be 'take it' to refer correctly to the notes or list.

× So it's a kind of burden for me. So phone is the easy way to make the notes and it and save it.

✓ So it's a kind of burden for me. So the phone is the easy way to make notes and save them.

'So phone is the easy way' should be 'So the phone is the easy way' to include the definite article. 'Make the notes and it and save it' is ungrammatical; it should be 'make notes and save them' for clarity and correctness.