List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้องมากขึ้น เช่น การใช้ tense ที่เหมาะสม และควรหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อน เช่น 'make a list' และ 'go to shop' ควรใช้คำที่เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น เช่น 'I don't usually make a shopping list because it helps me feel relaxed and independent.'

Ejemplo: I don't usually make a shopping list because it helps me feel relaxed and independent when I shop.

Sugerencia: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้ไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ให้ถูกต้อง เช่น 'sometimes' แทน 'sometime' และใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ชัดเจน เช่น 'I sometimes make a list for work to remind myself of priorities and ensure tasks are completed in order.'

Ejemplo: I sometimes make a list for work to remind myself of priorities and ensure tasks are completed in order.

Sugerencia: คำตอบควรชัดเจนและใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'like' แทน 'lie' และ 'list' แทน 'lead' รวมถึงโครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'Some people prefer to be independent and spontaneous, so they don't like making lists because it feels restrictive.'

Ejemplo: Some people prefer to be independent and spontaneous, so they don't like making lists because it feels restrictive.

Sugerencia: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้ไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ เช่น 'sometimes' แทน 'sometime' และใช้ประโยคที่กระชับ เช่น 'I prefer making lists on paper because my phone can run out of battery, and paper is tangible and easy to check.'

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because my phone can run out of battery, and paper is tangible and easy to check.

× No, for me I didn't make a list when I go to shop because I feel like relaxed and independent so I never make at least when I go shopping.

✓ No, for me I didn't make a list when I went shopping because I felt relaxed and independent so I never made one at least when I went shopping.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Go' should be 'went' to match past tense 'didn't make'. 'Feel' should be 'felt' to maintain past tense consistency. 'Make' should be 'made' to agree with past tense context. Consistent past tense is necessary for clarity.

× Does it work? For work, sometime I make a list for my work because I need to remind myself about priority offer, which one I should to do 1st and which one I need to do the next step because make sure it's work.

✓ Does it work? For work, sometimes I make a list because I need to remind myself about priorities, which one I should do first and which one I need to do next to make sure it works.

Incorrect use of 'should to do' should be 'should do' as modal verbs are followed by base verb without 'to'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' as an adverb. 'Make sure it's work' should be 'make sure it works' to use correct verb form and subject-verb agreement.

× I think someone really lie to do something independent and do something spontaneously. No need to make lead because make them straight if I have to complete everything in the list.

✓ I think some people really like to do things independently and spontaneously. There is no need to make a list because it makes them stressed if they have to complete everything on the list.

'Someone really lie' is incorrect; should be 'some people really like'. 'Do something independent' should be 'do things independently' to use correct adverb form. 'Make lead' is unclear, corrected to 'make a list'. 'Make them straight' is unclear, corrected to 'makes them stressed'. Pronouns and expressions were incorrect or unclear.

× For me, I prefer to make a list on paper because if I make it in my phone it's sometime out of power so I can't see. Everything on paper is tangible and easier to have a look, so I really like to make take note on paper.

✓ For me, I prefer to make a list on paper because if I make it on my phone, sometimes it runs out of power so I can't see it. Everything on paper is tangible and easier to look at, so I really like to take notes on paper.

Incorrect preposition 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Out of power' is better expressed as 'runs out of power'. 'Have a look' should be 'look at'. 'Make take note' is incorrect; corrected to 'take notes'. Prepositions and expressions were misused.