List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 答えは質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。具体的な理由や例を明確に述べ、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。例えば、「I remember all the things I need to buy, so I don't make a list. Also, sometimes I suddenly remember something I want to buy while shopping, so a list doesn't help me much.」のように表現すると良いでしょう。

Ejemplo: No, I don't make a list when I shop because I usually remember everything I need. Also, sometimes I suddenly think of something I want to buy while I'm in the store, so a list doesn't help me much.

× I remember all the thing I need to buy in my brain and also rest doesn't help me anything because suddenly I will come up with mind that the thing I want to buy in the store.

✓ I remember all the things I need to buy in my brain and also the list doesn't help me at all because suddenly I will come up with the idea of the things I want to buy in the store.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'rest' seems to be a typo or misuse for 'list'. 'Doesn't help me anything' is incorrect; it should be 'doesn't help me at all'. The phrase 'come up with mind' is incorrect; it should be 'come up with the idea'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I remember all the thing I need to buy in my brain and also rest doesn't help me anything because suddenly I will come up with mind that the thing I want to buy in the store.

✓ I remember all the things I need to buy in my brain and also the list doesn't help me at all because suddenly I will come up with the idea of the things I want to buy in the store.

The pronoun 'rest' is incorrectly used; it should be 'list' to refer to the shopping list. Also, 'come up with mind' is incorrect; it should be 'come up with the idea'. Proper pronoun and noun usage is essential for clear communication.

× Not for working but I will make my skin for my study then.

✓ Not for work but I will make my plan for my study then.

The phrase 'make my skin' is incorrect and likely a misuse of words. It should be 'make my plan' or 'make a schedule'. Also, 'will' is used correctly here to indicate future intention.

× This is because I am believing that it is very important for students to make the scheme for studying the.

✓ This is because I believe that it is very important for students to make a study plan.

'I am believing' is incorrect; 'believe' is a stative verb and should be in simple present tense. 'Make the scheme for studying the' is awkward; 'make a study plan' is clearer and more natural.

× So again we can control our time of study and we can get good score at exam.

✓ So again we can control our study time and we can get good scores on exams.

'Time of study' is better expressed as 'study time'. 'Good score' should be plural 'good scores' because exams are usually multiple. Also, 'at exam' should be 'on exams' for correct preposition use.

× So again we can control our time of study and we can get good score at exam.

✓ So again we can control our study time and we can get good scores on exams.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect here; 'on' is the correct preposition to use with 'exams'. This correction improves the naturalness and correctness of the sentence.

× I am also among in that group and my reason is that I will forget I made a list while I'm doing my work and after finish the work I'll conjure up of the exists of the rest and I regret so many times so I started to not make the rest.

✓ I am also among that group and my reason is that I forget I made a list while I'm doing my work and after finishing the work I'll remember the existence of the list and I have regretted many times so I started not to make the list.

The phrase 'among in' is incorrect; it should be 'among'. 'Conjure up of the exists of the rest' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'remember the existence of the list'. 'After finish' should be 'after finishing'. These corrections fix preposition and verb form errors.

× I am also among in that group and my reason is that I will forget I made a list while I'm doing my work and after finish the work I'll conjure up of the exists of the rest and I regret so many times so I started to not make the rest.

✓ I am also among that group and my reason is that I forget I made a list while I'm doing my work and after finishing the work I'll remember the existence of the list and I have regretted many times so I started not to make the list.

'After finish' should be 'after finishing' because after + verb requires the gerund form. This is a common grammatical structure in English.

× I am also among in that group and my reason is that I will forget I made a list while I'm doing my work and after finish the work I'll conjure up of the exists of the rest and I regret so many times so I started to not make the rest.

✓ I am also among that group and my reason is that I forget I made a list while I'm doing my work and after finishing the work I'll remember the existence of the list and I have regretted many times so I started not to make the list.

The word 'rest' is likely a misspelling of 'list'. Also, 'exists' should be 'existence'. Correcting these to 'list' and 'existence' clarifies the meaning and corrects singular/plural and noun form errors.

× I am also among in that group and my reason is that I will forget I made a list while I'm doing my work and after finish the work I'll conjure up of the exists of the rest and I regret so many times so I started to not make the rest.

✓ I am also among that group and my reason is that I forget I made a list while I'm doing my work and after finishing the work I'll remember the existence of the list and I have regretted many times so I started not to make the list.

The pronoun 'rest' is incorrectly used instead of 'list'. Correct pronoun and noun usage is important for clarity.

× In general I think most people are using cell phone to make their list.

✓ In general, I think most people use cell phones to make their lists.

'Using cell phone' should be 'use cell phones' to match plural and habitual action. Also, 'make their list' should be 'make their lists' to agree with plural subject. Adding a comma after 'In general' improves readability.

× In general I think most people are using cell phone to make their list.

✓ In general, I think most people use cell phones to make their lists.

'Are using' suggests a continuous action, but here a habitual action is described, so simple present 'use' is appropriate.

× But for me I prefer to use paper list because when I using my paper list I am holding it on my hand so I rarely forget about rest.

✓ But for me, I prefer to use a paper list because when I use my paper list I am holding it in my hand so I rarely forget about the list.

'Paper list' should have an article 'a' because it is singular and countable. 'When I using' is incorrect; it should be 'when I use'. 'On my hand' should be 'in my hand'. 'Rest' should be 'list'.

× But for me I prefer to use paper list because when I using my paper list I am holding it on my hand so I rarely forget about rest.

✓ But for me, I prefer to use a paper list because when I use my paper list I am holding it in my hand so I rarely forget about the list.

'On my hand' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in my hand' when referring to holding something.

× But for me I prefer to use paper list because when I using my paper list I am holding it on my hand so I rarely forget about rest.

✓ But for me, I prefer to use a paper list because when I use my paper list I am holding it in my hand so I rarely forget about the list.

'When I using' is incorrect; after 'when' the base form or present tense should be used, so 'when I use' is correct.