Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Nope. Sometime, no. Yeah, I rarely go to the shopping mall. And the important thing that I am a frequent person who don't want to do everything like this. So if I like, I will buy. If I don't, I will not buy it.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, of course I have to make a list for my work is help me to manage the time. It help me to remain the great time of job and do the schedule.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I don't think like that. I think everyone loves making lists. Or if, if don't, I think they're a fringe person like me, because everyone also wanted to have a schedule, a clearly schedule and the list of things that they have to do. If they don't, don't know.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer to make a list on my because if I make a list on the paper, I think I will forget it. At home I I always put the together to me so I can put it everywhere every time.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ejemplo: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, I sometimes make a list if I need to buy specific items to avoid forgetting them.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và chú ý đến ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là thì và cấu trúc câu. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.
Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me manage my time effectively. It allows me to stay organized and complete my tasks according to the schedule.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn không trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên đưa ra ý kiến rõ ràng, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể hơn.
Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer to be more spontaneous. They might feel that lists limit their freedom to choose what to do each day.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên nói rõ hơn về sở thích của mình và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I won't forget my tasks. Making lists on paper is less convenient since I might lose or forget them.
× Nope. Sometime, no.
✓ Nope. Sometimes, no.
The word 'Sometime' is incorrect here; the correct plural form 'Sometimes' should be used to indicate frequency.
× Yeah, I rarely go to the shopping mall.
✓ Yeah, I rarely go to shopping malls.
'Shopping mall' should be pluralized to 'shopping malls' to refer generally to such places, as the speaker likely means any mall, not a specific one.
× And the important thing that I am a frequent person who don't want to do everything like this.
✓ And the important thing is that I am a frequent person who doesn't want to do everything like this.
The verb 'don't' does not agree with the singular subject 'person'; it should be 'doesn't'. Also, the sentence was missing the verb 'is' after 'thing'.
× So if I like, I will buy.
✓ So if I like it, I will buy it.
The sentence is missing the object 'it' after 'like' to complete the conditional clause properly.
× If I don't, I will not buy it.
✓ If I don't, I will not buy it.
This sentence is correct in modal verb usage and needs no correction.
× Yes, of course I have to make a list for my work is help me to manage the time.
✓ Yes, of course I have to make a list for my work because it helps me to manage my time.
The original sentence lacks proper conjunction and subject-verb agreement; 'is help me' is incorrect and should be 'because it helps me'.
× It help me to remain the great time of job and do the schedule.
✓ It helps me to manage my time well and follow the schedule.
The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Also, 'remain the great time of job' is awkward and corrected to 'manage my time well'.
× I don't think like that.
✓ I don't think so.
The phrase 'think like that' is incorrect here; the correct expression is 'think so' to express disagreement.
× I think everyone loves making lists.
✓ I think everyone loves making lists.
This sentence is correct and needs no correction.
× Or if, if don't, I think they're a fringe person like me, because everyone also wanted to have a schedule, a clearly schedule and the list of things that they have to do.
✓ Or if they don't, I think they're fringe people like me, because everyone also wants to have a clear schedule and a list of things that they have to do.
Missing subject 'they' after 'if'; 'fringe person' should be plural 'fringe people'; 'wanted' should be present tense 'wants'; 'clearly schedule' should be 'clear schedule'.
× If they don't, don't know.
✓ If they don't, they don't know.
The sentence is missing the subject 'they' in the second clause.
× I prefer to make a list on my because if I make a list on the paper, I think I will forget it.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because if I make a list on paper, I think I will forget it.
The word 'my' is incomplete; it should be 'my phone'. Also, 'on the paper' should be 'on paper'.
× At home I I always put the together to me so I can put it everywhere every time.
✓ At home, I always keep it with me so I can access it anytime, anywhere.
The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical; corrected for clarity and proper structure.