List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答自然且直接，但可以更简洁，避免重复表达。例如“do usually”可以简化为“usually”。此外，可以用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping or ordering online because it helps me avoid forgetting necessary items.

Sugerencia: 回答内容丰富，但句子结构有些重复且不够流畅。建议使用连接词如“so”或“therefore”来连接句子，并注意语法，如“with an advice”应为“with advice”。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have been making lists for my work for a few years. At first, I made very long lists which stressed me out, so on a friend's advice, I started making brief lists, which have made my work more efficient.

Sugerencia: 回答表达了观点，但语法和用词有误，如“doesn't like the making lists”应为“don't like making lists”。建议简化句子，使用更自然的表达和连接词。

Ejemplo: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it boring and feel it makes them robotic. I used to think being spontaneous was important, but that often caused chaos.

Sugerencia: 回答内容具体且有例子，但有些口头语“uh”影响流畅度。建议减少口头语，使用连接词如“also”替代“second of all”，使表达更自然。

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient. For example, I can add items to my calendar to avoid forgetting them. Also, I can easily share the list with friends without rewriting it.

× Yes, of course. I do usually make a list before I go for shopping or order something online.

✓ Yes, of course. I usually do make a list before I go shopping or order something online.

The adverb 'usually' should be placed before the main verb 'do make' to follow correct adverb placement rules in English. Also, 'go for shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping' without 'for'.

× I do usually make a list before I go for shopping or order something online.

✓ I usually make a list before I go shopping or order something online.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping' without the preposition 'for'.

× With an advice from a friend I started making brief lists and which has been working quite well and quite making my work efficient.

✓ With advice from a friend, I started making brief lists which have been working quite well and have made my work more efficient.

The phrase 'With an advice' is incorrect because 'advice' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'an'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; 'which has been working' should agree with the plural 'lists' as 'have been working'. The phrase 'quite making my work efficient' is incorrect; it should be 'have made my work more efficient'.

× With an advice from a friend I started making brief lists and which has been working quite well and quite making my work efficient.

✓ With advice from a friend, I started making brief lists which have been working quite well and have made my work more efficient.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'lists' (plural), so the verb should be 'have been working' instead of 'has been working'.

× I think I know exactly why, because few years ago I was just one of those people who doesn't like the making lists.

✓ I think I know exactly why, because a few years ago I was just one of those people who don't like making lists.

The phrase 'few years ago' needs the article 'a' to be correct: 'a few years ago'. Also, 'who doesn't like the making lists' is incorrect; it should be 'who don't like making lists' because 'people' is plural and 'making lists' does not need 'the'.

× I think I know exactly why, because few years ago I was just one of those people who doesn't like the making lists.

✓ I think I know exactly why, because a few years ago I was just one of those people who don't like making lists.

The article 'the' before 'making lists' is unnecessary and incorrect. 'Making lists' is a general activity and does not require 'the'.

× I have thought making lists, whether for work or study was really mundane and redundant, even made me feel robotic.

✓ I thought making lists, whether for work or study, was really mundane and redundant and even made me feel robotic.

The phrase 'I have thought' is awkward here; simple past 'I thought' fits better. Also, a comma is needed after 'study' to separate clauses. The conjunction 'and' should connect the two ideas properly.

× I thought being spontaneous is a must as a human being, but that led to chaos.

✓ I thought being spontaneous was a must as a human being, but that led to chaos.

The verb tense should be consistent; 'is' should be 'was' to match the past tense 'thought'. The article usage is correct here.

× Personally, I prefer to make a list on my phone due to its convenience.

✓ Personally, I prefer to make a list on my phone because of its convenience.

The phrase 'due to' is often used after a form of 'to be'; 'because of' is more appropriate here to indicate reason.

× For example, if I have a list for tomorrow, I can just put it on my calendar on my phone in advance, which can help me to, uh, prevent forgetting it.

✓ For example, if I have a list for tomorrow, I can just put it in my calendar on my phone in advance, which can help me prevent forgetting it.

The correct preposition with 'calendar' is 'in' not 'on'. Also, 'help me to prevent' can be simplified to 'help me prevent'.

× Second of all, if I have to go out with my friends, I can just share it on my phone without, uh, the trouble of rewriting it.

✓ Second of all, if I have to go out with my friends, I can just share it from my phone without, uh, the trouble of rewriting it.

The correct preposition with 'share' in this context is 'from' my phone, not 'on' my phone.