List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在较多犹豫词（如umm, uh）和重复表达，影响流畅性。建议减少填充词，使用更自然简洁的表达方式，并直接回答问题。

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I have a poor memory. I write down all the items I need and tick them off after buying.

Sugerencia: 回答结构不够清晰，表达重复且不够连贯。建议使用更明确的句子结构，避免重复，并用连接词使回答更流畅。

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a daily list for my studies. I write down the tasks and deadlines, which helps me stay organized and mark completed items.

Sugerencia: 回答含糊且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议用更准确的词汇和句子表达观点，避免重复和填充词。

Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer a flexible lifestyle and enjoy surprises in their work.

Sugerencia: 回答较为完整但存在重复和语法不准确。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更准确的表达。

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient. I can check and update my list anytime, and it's easy to erase mistakes quickly.

× Guess how I will make a list when I shop?

✓ Guess how I make a list when I shop?

这里的句子是在描述习惯性的动作，应该使用一般现在时，而不是将来时的情态动词“will”。

× I need to umm, write take down note about those things because I'm having a umm, poor uh, memory skill.

✓ I need to umm, take down notes about those things because I have poor memory skills.

动词短语“write take down note”结构混乱，应使用“take down notes”表示记笔记；“I'm having”不用于描述状态，改为“I have”；“memory skill”应为复数“memory skills”。

× So every day I'm going to like having study, I will try to make at least like writing of the time I need to finish and also some tests I need to complete in the time I write.

✓ So every day I'm studying, I try to write down the time I need to finish and also some tests I need to complete in that time.

“I'm going to like having study”表达不正确，应改为“I’m studying”；“make at least like writing of the time”表达混乱，应改为“try to write down the time”；“in the time I write”应为“in that time”。

× And also it is it is really useful. So I can always like mark the things.

✓ And also it is really useful. So I can always mark the things.

句中重复使用“it is it is”多余，应删除重复部分。

× So I think they are some person really like freestyle in their life which which is also an experience umm really new for someone.

✓ So I think some people really like to freestyle in their life, which is also a really new experience for some people.

“they are some person”结构错误，应为“some people”；“which which”重复，应删除一个；“really new for someone”表达不自然，改为“a really new experience for some people”。

× And also I feel them they like some umm surprise in their umm work.

✓ And also I feel that they like some surprises in their work.

“I feel them”用法错误，应为“I feel that they”；“some umm surprise”应为复数“some surprises”；“in their umm work”中“umm”应去除。

× So I prefer to make a list of my phone because it is it is more convenient.

✓ So I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient.

介词“of”用错，表示在手机上做列表应使用“on”。

× So everywhere you go, you can just bring out your phone and check it and also mark them everywhere you want.

✓ So everywhere you go, you can just take out your phone and check it and also mark items wherever you want.

“bring out your phone”表达不自然，改为“take out your phone”；“mark them”中“them”指代不明，改为“mark items”；“everywhere you want”改为“wherever you want”。

× And also umm, using the phone you can umm, really easy to erase everything you you write it wrong.

✓ And also, using the phone, you can easily erase everything you write wrong.

“really easy”应为副词“easily”；“you you”重复，应删除一个；“write it wrong”中“it”多余，应删除。

× It is really faster than.

✓ It is really faster than writing on paper.

句子不完整，缺少比较对象，应补充完整比较内容。