Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Sometimes I make a list when I shop, I will list what I want to buy and buy things from it. But sometimes I like the movement just shopping, but I don't buy anything. I think it is very interesting.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
I'm a student now and sometimes I make a list for UH for my study. I list what things I should do and what time I should do, what things I think it is work. It make me clear about what things I should do in the near future.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I think they want to be more spontaneous, they want make the things they want and could change anytime and couldn't be limited by some lists. So I think they like the more free freedom lifestyle.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer make a list on my phone because I think it's more convenient. I can change the schedule anytime and anywhere and I think it is a good way to make a list in on my phone. So I think it is I prefer.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不清,如“the movement just shopping”表达不自然。建议使用更准确的表达方式,并保持句子简洁。
Ejemplo: Sometimes I make a shopping list to help me remember what to buy. However, sometimes I just enjoy browsing in the store without buying anything because I find it interesting.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,如“for UH for my study”和“what things I think it is work”。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式,表达更清晰。
Ejemplo: As a student, I sometimes make a to-do list for my studies. I write down the tasks I need to complete and their deadlines, which helps me stay organized and focused.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中语法和表达不够准确,如“want make the things they want”和“more free freedom lifestyle”。建议简化句子结构,使用更自然的表达。
Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and flexible. They enjoy doing things as they feel like without being restricted by a fixed plan.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答中有重复和语法错误,如“it is a good way to make a list in on my phone”和“it is I prefer”。建议简洁表达,避免重复。
Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient. I can easily add or change items anytime and anywhere, which helps me stay organized.
× Sometimes I make a list when I shop, I will list what I want to buy and buy things from it.
✓ Sometimes I make a list when I shop. I will list what I want to buy and buy things from it.
原句是复合句,但用逗号连接两个独立句,属于逗号拼接错误。应使用句号分开,避免句子结构错误。
× I like the movement just shopping, but I don't buy anything.
✓ I like the movement of just shopping, but I don't buy anything.
动词短语后缺少介词“of”,导致表达不完整。应加介词使句意明确。
× I list what things I should do and what time I should do, what things I think it is work.
✓ I list what things I should do and when I should do them, what things I think will work.
原句中“what time I should do”表达不准确,应改为“when I should do them”;“what things I think it is work”结构混乱,需调整为“what things I think will work”。
× It make me clear about what things I should do in the near future.
✓ It makes me clear about what things I should do in the near future.
主语“It”为第三人称单数,谓语动词应加-s,保持主谓一致。
× they want make the things they want and could change anytime and couldn't be limited by some lists.
✓ they want to make the things they want and could change anytime and couldn't be limited by some lists.
动词“want”后缺少不定式“to”,导致语法错误。应加“to”使句子完整。
× So I think they like the more free freedom lifestyle.
✓ So I think they like a freer, more free lifestyle.
形容词顺序和比较级使用不当,应调整为“a freer, more free lifestyle”以符合英语习惯。
× I prefer make a list on my phone because I think it's more convenient.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it's more convenient.
动词“prefer”后应接不定式“to make”,缺少“to”导致语法错误。
× I think it is a good way to make a list in on my phone.
✓ I think it is a good way to make a list on my phone.
介词“in”和“on”重复使用,造成错误,应去掉“in”。
× So I think it is I prefer.
✓ So I think it is what I prefer.
句子结构不完整,缺少关系代词“what”,导致表达不清晰。