List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Votre réponse est compréhensible mais manque de fluidité et de précision. Évitez les erreurs grammaticales comme "remember of" et essayez d'utiliser des phrases plus naturelles et concises. Par exemple, commencez par une phrase claire, puis ajoutez une raison spécifique avec un lien logique.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I find it hard to remember everything I need. This helps me avoid forgetting important items and saves time at the store.

Sugerencia: Votre réponse est un peu désorganisée et contient des hésitations. Essayez de structurer votre réponse avec une phrase principale claire, suivie d'un exemple précis, en évitant les répétitions et les pauses inutiles.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list at work to stay organized. For instance, when I have many tasks, I write them down on paper and complete them one by one, which helps me manage my time effectively.

Sugerencia: La réponse manque de clarté et de structure. Utilisez une phrase d'introduction claire, puis expliquez la raison avec des détails spécifiques. Faites attention à la grammaire et évitez les répétitions et hésitations.

Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they feel overwhelmed when they cannot complete all the tasks. This can cause stress and a sense of disorganization.

Sugerencia: Votre réponse est claire mais pourrait être enrichie avec plus de détails pour être plus convaincante. Ajoutez une raison supplémentaire ou une comparaison pour renforcer votre opinion.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because crossing out completed tasks gives me a sense of satisfaction. Also, paper lists are easier to access without worrying about battery life or technical issues.

× Yes I do because I'm struggling with my memorizing.

✓ Yes, I do because I'm struggling with my memory.

The phrase 'my memorizing' is incorrect because 'memorizing' is a verb form, not a noun. The correct noun to express the ability or process of remembering is 'memory'. Therefore, 'my memory' should be used instead.

× That's why I make a list to remember of the stuff that I must buy.

✓ That's why I make a list to remember the stuff that I must buy.

The preposition 'of' after 'remember' is unnecessary and incorrect in this context. The verb 'remember' is directly followed by the object without 'of'. Removing 'of' corrects the sentence.

× Yes, I usually do a list at my work to keep everything organized.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list at my work to keep everything organized.

The verb 'do' is incorrectly used with 'a list'. The correct collocation is 'make a list'. Therefore, 'do a list' should be corrected to 'make a list'.

× For example, when I have a lot of tasks to do, I wrote them on a paper to uh, to do uh one by one, and then uh.

✓ For example, when I have a lot of tasks to do, I write them on paper to do one by one.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past tense 'wrote'. Since the action is habitual, present tense 'write' should be used. Also, 'on a paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct phrase.

× Make a list with tasks that he must do and he uh can't complete umm all the the things.

✓ Some people make a list with tasks that they must do but can't complete all the things.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and uses inconsistent pronouns. Using 'Some people' as subject and 'they' as pronoun ensures clarity and agreement.

× So he feel that he is stressed and not organized.

✓ So he feels that he is stressed and not organized.

The subject 'he' requires the verb 'feels' with an 's' in the third person singular form to agree in number.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because I really feel satisfied when I cross out the task that I did.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I really feel satisfied when I cross out the tasks that I have done.

The singular 'the task' should be plural 'the tasks' to match the context of multiple tasks. Also, 'that I did' is better expressed as 'that I have done' to indicate completed actions relevant to the present.