List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. For example, clarify who makes the list and what kind of list it is, and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Ejemplo: I usually don't make a shopping list myself, but my mother often sends me a list of groceries she needs. This helps me remember what to buy when I go shopping.

Sugerencia: Improve coherence by using linking words and correct grammar. Also, explain why making lists did not work for you to add more specific supporting details.

Ejemplo: I prefer not to make lists for my work because I usually handle tasks as they come. In the past, I tried making lists, but I found them ineffective since I often had to change priorities unexpectedly.

Sugerencia: Focus on clarity and fluency by avoiding repetition and correcting grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a clear reason why some people dislike making lists.

Ejemplo: Some people, including myself, dislike making lists because they feel it creates pressure and limits their freedom to work in their own way. Therefore, they prefer a more flexible approach.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding unnecessary words and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

Ejemplo: Although I usually don't make lists, if I have to, I prefer using my phone because it's digital and more convenient than paper and pen.

× I do not make a list when I shop, but uh, usually when I go to go to shop for grocery my mother tend to send a list of items you want to watch.

✓ I do not make a list when I shop, but uh, usually when I go to shop for groceries my mother tends to send a list of items she wants to buy.

The verb 'tend' should be in the third person singular form 'tends' to agree with the singular subject 'my mother'. Also, 'go to go to shop' is redundant and should be 'go to shop'. 'Grocery' should be plural 'groceries' as it refers to multiple items. 'You want to watch' is incorrect; it should be 'she wants to buy' to match the subject and context.

× I do not make a list when I shop, but uh, usually when I go to go to shop for grocery my mother tend to send a list of items you want to watch.

✓ I do not make a list when I shop, but uh, usually when I go to shop for groceries my mother tends to send a list of items she wants to buy.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrectly used here; it should be 'she' to refer to 'my mother'. Also, 'watch' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'buy'.

× I prefer not to make a list for my work. I usually do it in ad hoc way.

✓ I prefer not to make a list for my work. I usually do it in an ad hoc way.

The phrase 'in ad hoc way' is missing the article 'an' before 'ad hoc'. Prepositions often require articles to be grammatically correct.

× In past I've tried to make a list and I was never successful in it, so I prefer not to do it.

✓ In the past, I've tried to make a list and I was never successful at it, so I prefer not to do it.

The phrase 'In past' should be 'In the past' to be grammatically correct. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'at' when referring to success in something.

× I, I myself is one of the one of the people who prefer not to make thinking or make a list because I think I'm making a list adds a pressure on you and you cannot do the kind of what, whatever kind of work you want to do freely, which is something that I do not prefer.

✓ I, I myself am one of the people who prefer not to think or make a list because I think making a list adds pressure on you and you cannot do whatever kind of work you want to do freely, which is something that I do not prefer.

The verb 'is' should be 'am' to agree with the subject 'I'. The phrase 'one of the one of the people' is redundant and corrected to 'one of the people'. 'Make thinking' is incorrect; it should be 'think'. 'Adds a pressure' should be 'adds pressure' as 'pressure' is uncountable here. The phrase 'do the kind of what, whatever kind of work' is corrected to 'do whatever kind of work' for clarity and correctness.

× So I prefer not to make a list, but if I have to make a list then I'll do it on the phone because it's a digital.

✓ So I prefer not to make a list, but if I have to make a list then I'll do it on the phone because it's digital.

The article 'a' before 'digital' is incorrect because 'digital' is an adjective here and does not need an article.

× I think access to a phone is much easier as compared to paper than pen.

✓ I think access to a phone is much easier compared to paper and pen.

The phrase 'as compared to paper than pen' is incorrect. The correct conjunction to connect 'paper' and 'pen' is 'and'. Also, 'much easier compared to' is the correct comparative structure.