List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. Also, provide specific reasons with linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I have a good memory. Moreover, I prefer the freedom to choose items spontaneously rather than sticking to a list.

Sugerencia: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use correct verb tenses and clearer sentences. Also, use linking words to explain how making lists helps you.

Ejemplo: Yes, I made a list for my work last term, and it helped me a lot. Because of the list, I could organize my daily tasks better, and achieving my goals became easier.

Sugerencia: Your answer is vague and contains grammatical errors. Provide a clear reason with proper grammar and more specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they are busy with their jobs or studies. As a result, they don't have enough time to prepare lists.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but has minor grammar mistakes and redundancy. Use correct expressions and provide specific reasons with linking words to support your preference.

Ejemplo: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because it is very convenient. Additionally, I can easily edit or access my lists anytime, which paper lists don't allow.

× I never made a list when I shop 'cause I think I can, I get a good memory and I can't remember what I should build, what I should build to the supermarket or something.

✓ I never make a list when I shop because I think I have a good memory and I can remember what I should buy, what I should buy at the supermarket or something.

The sentence mixes past tense 'made' with present tense 'shop'. Since the question is about habitual action, present tense 'make' should be used. Also, 'build' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'buy' when referring to purchasing items.

× what I should build to the supermarket or something.

✓ what I should buy at the supermarket or something.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect in this context. When referring to shopping at a place, 'at' is the correct preposition to indicate location.

× And I prefer to have a freedom more have a free shop.

✓ And I prefer to have more freedom to shop freely.

The phrase 'have a freedom more have a free shop' is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Freedom' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a'. The corrected sentence uses 'more freedom' and 'shop freely' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I do made a list for my work just last term and it really helps me a lot.

✓ I made a list for my work just last term and it really helped me a lot.

The auxiliary 'do' should not be combined with the past tense 'made'. The correct past tense form is 'I made'. Also, 'helps' should be in past tense 'helped' to match the past time reference 'last term'.

× I can do what I should to what I should to do every every day and if there is a goal things comes to easier.

✓ I can do what I should do every day, and if there is a goal, things become easier.

The phrase 'what I should to what I should to do' is redundant and incorrect. It should be 'what I should do'. Also, 'things comes to easier' is ungrammatical; the correct form is 'things become easier'. Commas are added for clarity.

× 'Cause people are just occurred with their jobs or studies so they didn't have time to make a list or some stuff.

✓ Because people are just occupied with their jobs or studies, so they don't have time to make a list or do some stuff.

The verb 'occurred' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'occupied'. Also, the sentence mixes past tense 'didn't have' with present context; 'don't have' fits better. 'Cause' is informal and expanded to 'Because' for clarity.

× I definitely go with make a list on my phone.

✓ I definitely go with making a list on my phone.

The verb 'make' should be in the gerund form 'making' after the phrase 'go with'. This is a common structure in English.

× you can just hand hand it.

✓ you can just handle it.

The phrase 'hand hand it' is incorrect and likely a mispronunciation or typo. The correct verb is 'handle' meaning to manage or deal with something.