List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Verbessern Sie die Klarheit und Grammatik, indem Sie kurze, klare Sätze verwenden. Vermeiden Sie Wiederholungen und unklare Ausdrücke. Strukturieren Sie die Antwort mit einem klaren Thema und unterstützenden Details.

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually make a shopping list because I think I will remember what I need. However, I often forget items, so I plan to make a list in the future to avoid this problem.

Sugerencia: Verwenden Sie verbindende Wörter, um die Antwort flüssiger zu machen, und achten Sie auf die korrekte Zeitform. Fügen Sie spezifischere Details hinzu, um die Effektivität der Listen zu erklären.

Ejemplo: I only make lists for important appointments or meetings. They work well because my phone sends reminders a day before and again 20 minutes before the event, which helps me stay organized and punctual.

Sugerencia: Verbessern Sie die Grammatik und Satzstruktur. Verwenden Sie klarere und präzisere Formulierungen und fügen Sie Beispiele oder Gründe hinzu, um die Antwort zu stärken.

Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they feel they won't follow them or believe they can remember important appointments without help. However, I recommend writing things down since it's easy to forget otherwise.

Sugerencia: Verbessern Sie die Grammatik und Wortwahl. Verwenden Sie klarere Sätze und erklären Sie genauer, warum das Telefon für Sie effektiver ist.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it keeps sending me reminders if I haven't completed my tasks. This helps me stay motivated and ensures I don't forget important things.

× No, I don't make Lasuna shop just because I always thought when I'm home when something runs out I I thought that I would remember once I go to the supermarket but I never did and I think I should make a list in the future with a shop.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I shop because I always think that when I'm at home and something runs out, I will remember it once I go to the supermarket, but I never do. I think I should make a list in the future when I shop.

The original sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly and has unclear phrasing. 'I always thought' should be 'I always think' to match the present context. Also, 'I would remember' should be 'I will remember' to express future expectation. The phrase 'with a shop' is incorrect and should be 'when I shop'. The sentence is also run-on and needs to be split for clarity.

× I would only make a list for some important appointment or meetings.

✓ I would only make a list for some important appointments or meetings.

The word 'appointment' should be plural 'appointments' to match 'meetings' and the quantifier 'some', which refers to multiple items.

× my phone would send me a reminder a day before the meeting start and also 20 minutes before it will send it again.

✓ my phone sends me a reminder a day before the meeting starts and also 20 minutes before, it sends it again.

The use of 'would send' is incorrect here; the present simple tense 'sends' is appropriate for habitual actions. Also, 'meeting start' should be 'meeting starts' to agree with the singular subject.

× I think for those people who doesn't like to make the list, they had the experience that they won't stick to the list and also they think that they can remember the important appointment on their own.

✓ I think for those people who don't like to make lists, they have had the experience that they won't stick to the list and also they think that they can remember important appointments on their own.

'doesn't' should be 'don't' to agree with plural 'people'. 'the list' should be 'lists' to generalize. 'had' should be 'have had' to indicate past experience relevant to present. 'appointment' should be plural 'appointments' to match the context.

× But I would suggest to everyone write it down because sometimes it can happen that you still forget that.

✓ But I would suggest that everyone write it down because sometimes it can happen that you still forget.

The verb 'suggest' is followed by 'that' plus the base form of the verb. 'to everyone write' is incorrect; it should be 'that everyone write'. Also, 'forget that' is awkward; 'forget' alone suffices.

× I would prefer to make a list on my phone because it's word keep sending me reminder if I didn't get the to dos done.

✓ I would prefer to make a list on my phone because it would keep sending me reminders if I didn't get the to-dos done.

'it's word' is incorrect; it should be 'it would'. 'reminder' should be plural 'reminders' to match the context. 'to dos' should be hyphenated as 'to-dos'. The sentence also needs modal verb 'would' to express conditional action.

× I think it's very effective for me because I need someone who keep reminding me and push me to doing all of this.

✓ I think it's very effective for me because I need someone who keeps reminding me and pushes me to do all of this.

'keep' should be 'keeps' to agree with singular 'someone'. 'push me to doing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'push me to do' because 'to' is a preposition here followed by the base verb form.