List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity. Begin with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two concise reasons with linking words. Avoid fillers (uh) and incomplete sentences. Use correct verb forms and articles, and keep the answer to no more than five sentences.

Ejemplo: No, I usually don’t make a shopping list. Instead, I shop spontaneously to lift my mood and relax after a busy week. Because I decide as I go, I often buy things that catch my eye rather than follow a plan.

Sugerencia: Make tense usage consistent and complete your ideas. Start with a clear statement, then explain how lists help using specific details and linking words (e.g., because, so). Remove hesitations and finish sentences fully.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a work list every morning because it helps me prioritise tasks and improve efficiency. For example, I plan my routine and tick off items as I finish them, which reduces wasted time and stress.

Sugerencia: Organise the answer with clearer linking and correct grammar. Use topic sentence then reasons with linking words like 'because' or 'for example.' Be specific and avoid awkward phrasing (e.g., 'bring trouble opens themselves').

Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it limits their freedom and flexibility. For example, they prefer to decide as they go, and others think making lists is unnecessary or too time-consuming, especially for casual shopping.

Sugerencia: Use correct forms and complete the comparison. Start with a clear preference, then give two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repeating ideas and finish sentences. Mention a brief contrast with paper lists if relevant.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it and it’s easy to edit items by tapping and deleting. Also, digital lists are more environmentally friendly than paper, which I might lose or waste.

× No, I don't actually the most time I always shopping directly without make any list, uh, because I always shopping for, uh, lift my mood and relax after busy week. Uh, so I always bought the things that.

✓ No, I don't. Actually, most of the time I always shop directly without making any list because I always shop to lift my mood and relax after a busy week, so I often buy whatever I want.

Multiple sentence structure and verb form errors: missing verb after 'I don't', incorrect phrase 'the most time' should be 'most of the time', incorrect continuous forms 'always shopping' should be 'always shop' or 'shop', incorrect 'without make' should be 'without making' (verb + -ing after 'without'), 'shopping for lift my mood' needs 'shop to lift my mood', missing article 'a busy week', and inconsistent past tense 'bought' should be present 'buy'. Suggestion: simplify into clear clauses, use 'most of the time', use base verb for habitual actions ('shop'), use gerund after prepositions (without making), and keep tense consistent for habits (present simple).

× Yes, I always make a list for my work. I often planned a routine, uh, in the morning so I can improving my efficiency of work and reduce the unnecessary time. So if I.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work. I often plan a routine in the morning so I can improve my work efficiency and reduce unnecessary time.

Tense and verb form errors: 'planned' is past but should be present simple 'plan' for habitual action; 'can improving' is incorrect — after 'can' use base verb 'improve'; 'the unnecessary time' should be 'unnecessary time' (article unnecessary). Suggestion: use present simple for routines, use modal + base verb structure (can + verb), and remove unnecessary definite article.

× I think some people feel that making lists limits their freedom and bring trouble opens themselves so they prefer to decide seeing as they go, and others find list making unnecessary or time consuming especially for shopping, so they avoid it.

✓ I think some people feel that making lists limits their freedom and brings trouble to themselves, so they prefer to decide as they go; others find list making unnecessary or time-consuming, especially for shopping, so they avoid it.

Multiple issues: subject-verb agreement 'bring' should be 'brings' to match singular 'making lists' or 'that' clause; awkward phrase 'opens themselves' should be 'to themselves' or omitted; 'decide seeing as they go' is unidiomatic — use 'decide as they go'; 'time consuming' should be hyphenated 'time-consuming'. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with subject, use correct prepositional phrase 'to themselves', and use idiomatic expressions.

× I prefer to making a list on my phone because I always carry my phone wherever I go and it's more convenient because I just need to tap in and delete it thing that I'll already did and make a list on paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry my phone wherever I go and it's more convenient: I can just tap it in and delete things that I have already done, whereas making a list on paper is not environmentally friendly.

'Prefer to making' is wrong; after 'prefer to' use base verb 'make' not gerund. 'Tap in' is colloquial — use 'tap it in' or 'enter it'; 'delete it thing that I'll already did' has multiple errors: wrong pronoun order, tense ('I'll already did' incorrect — should be 'I have already done'), and plural 'things'. Also 'make a list on paper' phrase moved for clarity and 'not environment friendly' should be 'not environmentally friendly'. Suggestion: after 'prefer to' use base verb, use present perfect for actions completed relative to now ('have already done'), and correct adjective form 'environmentally friendly'.

× it's not environment friendly, it's.

✓ It's not environmentally friendly.

Article and adjective form issues: 'environment friendly' should be adverb+adjective 'environmentally friendly'; trailing 'it's.' is incomplete. Suggestion: use correct adjective form and complete the sentence; keep concise statement.