List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答较清楚但存在语法、词汇和表达不自然的问题。注意：1) 用词准确（例如 “note apps” 而非 “not apps”）；2) 句子更简洁，避免冗长啰嗦；3) 使用连接词使句子更流畅。可以改成两到三句，先给出主题句，再补充细节和原因。

Ejemplo: Yes. I usually make a shopping list on the notes app on my phone because it reminds me what I need to buy. This is very convenient and helps me avoid forgetting items.

Sugerencia: 回答结构基本合理，但需改进语法和词汇的准确性，并用更自然的连接词。注意单复数（assignments），用更地道的表达（e.g. “prepare well” 而非 “do perfect preparation”）。保持句子在三到四句内，明确因果关系。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often make to-do lists for my work and studies because they help me stay organized. For example, when I have several assignments and competitions at university, a list lets me prioritize tasks and complete them on time.

Sugerencia: 回答有逻辑但表述不够自然且有语法错误。改进点：1) 避免用 “maybe” 和 “I think” 重复；2) 更准确的词汇（e.g. “troublesome” 或 “bothersome”）；3) 用连接词（Firstly, secondly）并给出更具体的解释或例子。

Ejemplo: Some people prefer not to make lists because they have a good memory and feel a list is unnecessary. Others find making lists bothersome or too restrictive, as they prefer to act spontaneously rather than plan everything.

Sugerencia: 回答内容明确，但语言可更自然，避免机械重复（例如两次使用 “I don't need”）。改进点：1) 合并相近句子，提高流畅度；2) 使用更贴切表达（e.g. “easily access” 而非 “know what I need to buy”）；3) 控制句子长度在两到三句。

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone, usually in the notes app, because it’s more convenient and I can access them anytime. That way I don’t have to carry paper or worry about losing my list.

× Yes, before I go shopping, I always record the goods that I need to buy by the not apps in the mobile phone which can remind me to buy them.

✓ Yes, before I go shopping, I always record the goods that I need to buy in the notes app on my mobile phone, which can remind me to buy them.

句中“the not apps”是错误的定冠词和名词形式及词序。应使用不定或零冠词的名词短语“the notes app”或“a notes app”，并且位置应为“in the notes app on my mobile phone”。同时“by”用于工具时不如“in”或“on”更自然。建议词序：先写应用（notes app），再写设备（on my mobile phone）。

× Yes, it can help me to do a good job. For instance, I have a lot of assignment and competitions in the university which require me to do perfect preparation for them.

✓ Yes, it can help me to do a good job. For instance, I have a lot of assignments and competitions at university which require me to make thorough preparations for them.

“a lot of assignment”中“assignment”应为复数“assignments”。另外“in the university”在英语中一般用“at university”或“at the university”视具体情况；“do perfect preparation”不自然，改为“make thorough preparations”更符合搭配。建议注意可数名词的单复数形式及固定搭配。

× If I make a list, I will finish them on time.

✓ If I make a list, I will finish them on time.

句子本身语法正确，但注意指代一致：前文提到的是“assignments and competitions”，用“them”可以，但更自然的是具体指“assignments”，可改为“finish them”或“finish the assignments on time”。此处仅提醒，无需更改结构。

× Firstly, I think maybe some people have good memory so they don't need to make lists.

✓ Firstly, I think maybe some people have good memories so they don't need to make lists.

“good memory”在这里指个体记忆力，习惯用复数“good memories”或更准确地用“good memories”指多个记忆，或者用“good memory”也可但需加冠词“a good memory”。建议使用“good memories”或“a good memory”。

× Moreover, many people think it is trouble to make list.

✓ Moreover, many people think it is troublesome to make a list.

原句中“it is trouble”不符合英语表达，正确应为“it is troublesome”或“it is a trouble”。另外“make list”缺少冠词，改为“make a list”。建议学习形容词与名词的正确搭配以及冠词使用。

× They want to do things that they want all the time.

✓ They want to do what they want all the time.

原句“do things that they want”冗长且不自然。改为“do what they want”更简洁准确，避免重复“want”。建议在类似句子中使用更自然的固定表达。

× I prefer making lists on my phone, especially in my notes app, because it is more convenient and I can know what I need to buy.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone, especially in my notes app, because it is more convenient and I can see what I need to buy.

“in my notes app”可接受，但“can know what I need to buy”不自然，英语中通常用“know”不接感官直接对象，改为“see”或“know what I need to buy”虽然可用但更自然的是“see”。建议用更贴切的动词搭配。

× Therefore I don't need to bring the paper and I don't need to worry about losing.

✓ Therefore I don't need to bring paper and I don't need to worry about losing it.

“the paper”不需要定冠词，通常说“bring paper”或“bring a piece of paper”。此外“worry about losing”缺少宾语，应补上“it”（指列表/纸）。建议注意可数名词冠词和动词短语的宾语完整性。