List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and use correct tense and grammar. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details, using linking words to connect ideas. Avoid filler words (umm, like) and repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list. For example, once I went to the supermarket without a list and forgot three items: cheddar cheese, mozzarella and spaghetti, so now I always write a list to avoid that.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct answer, then briefly explain with specifics and a linking phrase. Correct grammar (plural/singular, articles) and streamline phrasing to sound natural.

Ejemplo: No, I don’t usually make lists at work because my job requires split-second decisions. For instance, in emergency situations there isn’t time to complete a checklist, so I rely on training and routines instead.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, complete opinion and support it with a reason or example. Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement, sentence fragments) and remove hesitations. Use one linking phrase to structure the idea.

Ejemplo: I think some people dislike lists because they feel restricted by rules. For example, someone who prefers spontaneity might worry that a checklist forces them to follow a rigid routine.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, choose one option and explain with specific advantages using coherent linking words. Correct small errors and avoid repetition and hesitations.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it’s convenient and always with me. For example, my phone’s reminders alert me when I need to buy something, so I rarely forget items.

× I do make a list when I shop because there was a time that I don't make a list and there are lots of things that I have to purchase from supermarkets and there were one time that I forgot like 3 things including like cheddar cheese, umm, mozzarella and spaghetti and I have to make a list to ensure.

✓ I do make a list when I shop because there was a time when I didn't make a list and there were many things I had to buy from the supermarket; once I forgot three items, including cheddar cheese, mozzarella and spaghetti, so I now make a list to be sure.

Mixed past and present tenses and incorrect past negation were used. Use simple past 'didn't make' and 'had to buy' to describe past habits and events; use 'there was a time when' (not 'that') and 'many' instead of 'lots of' for formality; use 'once' to indicate a single past occurrence and 'so I now make a list' to link to present habit. Also correct plural agreement and streamline repetition. Suggested improvement: Keep past events in past tense and clearly separate past and present clauses; use 'didn't' for past negative and concise phrasing.

× I don't make a list during my work because during my service I have to make split second decisions that requires limitation of time and I just don't have the luxury of time to make a checklist to ensure everything I've done is done properly.

✓ I don't make a list at work because during my shift I have to make split-second decisions that require very limited time, and I simply don't have the luxury of time to make a checklist to ensure everything I do is done properly.

Several present-tense and agreement issues: use 'at work' (idiomatic) or 'during my shift' instead of 'during my work'; 'split-second' is hyphenated; verb must agree: 'decisions that require' not 'requires'; 'limited time' is clearer than 'limitation of time'; change 'everything I've done is done properly' to 'everything I do is done properly' to keep tense consistent with general statements about work. Suggested improvement: Ensure subject-verb agreement in relative clauses and maintain consistent present-tense forms for habitual actions.

× I'm not exactly sure why other people does not like to make a list, but my guess would be making the list is very umm, strict.

✓ I'm not exactly sure why other people do not like to make a list, but my guess is that making a list feels very strict to them.

Incorrect verb form 'does' with plural subject 'other people' — use 'do not'. Also the structure 'my guess would be making the list is very strict' is awkward; use 'my guess is that' and add 'to them' to clarify perspective. 'Feels very strict' is more natural than 'is very strict.' Suggested improvement: Match verb forms to plural subjects and use clearer reporting phrases like 'my guess is that'.

× And you I have If I make a list, I have to strictly obey with the checklist that I made.

✓ If I make a list, I have to strictly follow the checklist that I made.

Unnecessary words and wrong preposition 'obey with' used. Use verb + -ing form appropriately: here 'follow' is the correct verb; 'obey' typically takes an object without 'with' or is used with 'obey the rules.' Also remove extraneous fragments 'And you I have'. Suggested improvement: Use 'follow' or 'obey' correctly and remove filler words; keep sentence concise.

× So, uh, because of that, it will umm, you'll.

✓ So because of that, I avoid making lists.

Original is an incomplete, fragmented sentence with mixed pronouns and fillers; it lacks a clear verb phrase. Provide a complete sentence that conveys the intended meaning: link cause and effect clearly. Suggested improvement: Avoid filler sounds and incomplete clauses; state the result clearly.

× I would prefer to make a list on my because nowadays everyone has smartphones and they can can be carried out very easily.

✓ I would prefer to make a list on my phone because nowadays everyone has a smartphone and it can be carried very easily.

Sentence misses the word 'phone' after 'my'. Pronoun agreement: 'everyone has a smartphone' (singular) so use 'it' to refer to 'a smartphone'; remove duplicate word 'can'. Also 'carried out' is wrong here — use 'carried' or 'taken' to indicate portability. Suggested improvement: Ensure complete noun phrases and consistent pronoun reference; avoid duplication.

× Making a checklist from your phone would easily remind you that you have something ongoing to be resolved and you'll remember uh for that.

✓ Making a checklist on your phone will easily remind you about tasks you need to complete, and you'll remember them.

Awkward phrasing 'something ongoing to be resolved' and misplaced adverb 'easily'—use 'remind you about tasks you need to complete' which is clearer. Use 'remember them' to refer back to 'tasks' (plural). Use simple future or present continuous appropriately; here habitual/predictive present/future is fine. Remove filler 'uh for that.' Suggested improvement: Use clear noun 'tasks' and concise verbs like 'complete' and 'remember' to express intended meaning.