Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences more concise and correct, for example, avoid repeating words like 'without having without getting disturbed.' Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often go to the library because it provides a quiet environment where I can focus without distractions. Additionally, it's free to use, which is very convenient. I usually study English and mathematics there.

Sugerencia: Your answer is brief and has grammatical mistakes. Try to provide a complete sentence with correct grammar and add more details to enrich your response. Use linking words to explain why you focus on these subjects.

Ejemplo: Usually, I study English and mathematics in the library because they are my weakest subjects, and I want to improve my skills in these areas.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some hesitations and minor errors. Try to speak more fluently and avoid filler words like 'Yeah' at the end. Also, combine your ideas into coherent sentences using linking words.

Ejemplo: When I was a kid, I rarely went to the library because I preferred studying at home in my room, which was very peaceful and comfortable for me.

Sugerencia: Your answer is informative but a bit long and repetitive. Try to make your sentences more concise and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, watch for small grammar mistakes like missing articles.

Ejemplo: Chinese children usually do not go to the library because their mothers are strict and prefer to supervise their studying at home, so going to the library is not necessary.

× Yes, I go to the library very quite often.

✓ Yes, I go to the library quite often.

The adverbs 'very' and 'quite' are both used to modify frequency, but 'very quite' is incorrect and redundant. 'Quite often' is the correct phrase to express frequency.

× It allows me to study the things I want to study and without having without getting disturbed.

✓ It allows me to study the things I want to study without getting disturbed.

The phrase 'and without having without getting disturbed' is redundant and incorrect. The correct preposition is 'without' followed by the gerund 'getting disturbed' to express the absence of disturbance.

× I usually read English and mathematics.

✓ I usually study English and mathematics.

The verb 'read' is not appropriate here because subjects like English and mathematics are studied rather than read. Using 'study' is more accurate.

× Usually I study English and mathematics since it is the weakest subjects.

✓ Usually I study English and mathematics since they are the weakest subjects.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'subjects' which is plural. The verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural noun 'subjects'.

× When I was a kid, I never really went to library.

✓ When I was a kid, I never really went to the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× I used. I always used to study in my home, in my room.

✓ I always used to study at home, in my room.

The sentence 'I used.' is incomplete and unnecessary. Also, 'in my home' is better expressed as 'at home' to indicate location.

× so they're not required to go to library.

✓ so they're not required to go to the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.