Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng thì đúng. Ngoài ra, nên dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I don't often go to the library because it is far from my home. However, I sometimes visit it when I have free time or need to study quietly.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ cho chính xác hơn, ví dụ như 'I find use useful books' không đúng. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

Ejemplo: When I go to the library, I usually study because it provides a quiet environment. Also, I use useful books there to help with my research and homework.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng thì quá khứ đúng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid because my mother, who was a teacher, needed materials for her literature classes. She usually took me with her.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên tránh nói 'I don't actually know the right answer' trong bài thi IELTS. Thay vào đó, hãy đưa ra ý kiến rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'so smart'.

Ejemplo: I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because education is very important in their culture, and they need access to books and resources for their studies.

× But I'm sometimes go to the library if I have the convenience way.

✓ But I sometimes go to the library if I have a convenient way.

The modal verb 'am' is incorrectly used with 'sometimes go'. The correct form is 'I sometimes go' without 'am'. Also, 'convenience way' should be 'a convenient way' to use the correct adjective form.

× Well when I go to the library I usually go study because I need a quiet environment and I find use useful books that need for my research or my homework.

✓ Well, when I go to the library, I usually go to study because I need a quiet environment and I find useful books that I need for my research or my homework.

The phrase 'go study' should be 'go to study' to correctly use the verb with the infinitive. 'Find use useful books' is incorrect; it should be 'find useful books'. Also, 'that need for' should be 'that I need for' to include the subject.

× When it was a trial, my mom was a teacher so that she always need materials for her literature and whenever she came to the library she often took me with her.

✓ When I was a child, my mom was a teacher so she always needed materials for her literature and whenever she came to the library she often took me with her.

'When it was a trial' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'When I was a child' fits better. 'She always need' should be 'she always needed' to match past tense. The rest is correct.

× So I go to the library.

✓ So I went to the library.

The sentence refers to past events, so the verb should be in past tense 'went' instead of present tense 'go'.

× Well, I don't actually know the right answer for that question, but I guess the Chinese kids go to the library a lot because the people in that country are so smart and they have studied a lot, so I guess they also need the resources.

✓ Well, I don't actually know the right answer to that question, but I guess Chinese kids go to the library a lot because the people in that country are very smart and they have studied a lot, so I guess they also need the resources.

'The Chinese kids' is better as 'Chinese kids' without 'the' for generalization. 'Right answer for' should be 'right answer to'. 'So smart' is better as 'very smart' for natural expression.