Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami serta efektif. Hindari pengulangan dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas. Misalnya, gunakan 'I prefer reading physical books rather than digital ones' dan perbaiki kesalahan seperti 'give' menjadi 'gives'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often visit the library because it provides a quiet space for me to read. I prefer reading physical books rather than digital ones, so the library is my favorite place to enjoy them.

Sugerencia: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan linking words untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren. Hindari pengulangan dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami. Contohnya, gunakan 'because it provides a peaceful and quiet environment, I can focus better.'

Ejemplo: I usually borrow books, but sometimes I read them inside the library because it provides a peaceful and quiet environment, which helps me focus better on my reading.

Sugerencia: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan terstruktur. Gunakan linking words seperti 'especially' dan 'so' untuk memperjelas alasan. Contohnya, 'I started going to the library in junior high school because I loved reading novels, so I borrowed many books from the school library.'

Ejemplo: No, I didn't go to the library as a kid. I started visiting it when I was in junior high school because I loved reading novels, so I borrowed many books from the school library.

Sugerencia: Hindari mengatakan 'I don't have the answer' dan coba berikan pendapat atau pengalaman dengan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan alami. Gunakan linking words seperti 'however' untuk menghubungkan ide. Contohnya, 'I am not sure, but based on my experience, my Chinese friends preferred math over reading books.'

Ejemplo: I'm not sure about all Chinese kids, but based on my experience, my Chinese friends preferred doing math rather than reading books.

× It is quiet and give me a space when I read a book.

✓ It is quiet and gives me a space when I read a book.

The subject 'It' is singular, so the verb should be 'gives' to agree in number. Using 'give' is incorrect because it is the base form used with plural subjects or with 'I' and 'you'. (Subject-verb agreement errors)

× And I'm a type of person that I love read book physically than read a book.

✓ And I'm the type of person who loves to read books physically rather than reading books.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun use and verb form. 'That I love read book' is incorrect; it should be 'who loves to read books'. Also, 'physically than read a book' is awkward; 'rather than reading books' is clearer. 'The type' is more natural than 'a type'. (Incorrect use of pronouns)

× because like I said before it give a peace and quiet environment so I can focus on my reading on my book.

✓ because, like I said before, it gives a peaceful and quiet environment so I can focus on my reading.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'gives'. Also, 'peace and quiet environment' should be 'peaceful and quiet environment' for correct adjective use. 'Focus on my reading on my book' is redundant; 'focus on my reading' suffices. (Subject-verb agreement errors)

× I love reading book especially novel and I start borrow many books from my library schools at that time.

✓ I loved reading books, especially novels, and I started borrowing many books from my school library at that time.

The sentence refers to past time, so verbs should be in past tense: 'loved', 'started'. 'Borrow' should be 'borrowing' after 'started'. 'Library schools' is incorrect; it should be 'school library'. Also, plural forms 'books' and 'novels' are appropriate. (Past tense issue)

× they actually prefer to calculate like math than reading a book.

✓ they actually prefer to do calculations like math rather than reading a book.

The verb 'calculate' is incorrectly used; 'do calculations' is more natural. Also, 'like math' clarifies the subject. 'Than' should be preceded by 'rather' to form 'rather than' for comparison. (Incorrect use of prepositions)